Jo_J NO!😫 Damn it! It should’ve worked! Soo much time lost😩🥺 I’ll copy and paste the review here shortly. Did you want me to re-read through and comment? I can’t do it for a few days, but I can redo them if you want.

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    silent_walker Thank you I will try and take your improvements when I can. Right now my biggest concerns are plot and interesting characters but thank you for telling me about the structure problem. Honestly this is the best writing advice I've gotten in literally all my time here.

      silent_walker Thank you I will try and take your improvements when I can. Right now my biggest concerns are plot and interesting characters but thank you for telling me about the structure problem. Honestly this is the best writing advice I've gotten in literally all my time here.

        silent_walker I'm starting your review. Then comes @Dark_Scholars because I've promised him a review before even starting this thread. Then I go for @Epyonnn review for the same reason. After that comes @SpilledInk 's review because she persuaded me with her "cute eyes" don't worry I'll be as gentle as a cat when reviewing Enoka, (Translation: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA). cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes

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