Jo_J NO!😫 Damn it! It should’ve worked! Soo much time lost😩🥺 I’ll copy and paste the review here shortly. Did you want me to re-read through and comment? I can’t do it for a few days, but I can redo them if you want.

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      silent_walker Thank you I will try and take your improvements when I can. Right now my biggest concerns are plot and interesting characters but thank you for telling me about the structure problem. Honestly this is the best writing advice I've gotten in literally all my time here.

          silent_walker Thank you I will try and take your improvements when I can. Right now my biggest concerns are plot and interesting characters but thank you for telling me about the structure problem. Honestly this is the best writing advice I've gotten in literally all my time here.

              silent_walker I'm starting your review. Then comes @Dark_Scholars because I've promised him a review before even starting this thread. Then I go for @Epyonnn review for the same reason. After that comes @SpilledInk 's review because she persuaded me with her "cute eyes" don't worry I'll be as gentle as a cat when reviewing Enoka, (Translation: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA). cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes cute cat eyes

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                  SpilledInk Eeee... did you notice that your "Discord tag" links me to another page? :) :) :) (not actually smiling haha)
                  Here, take my tag then add me on discord: YoanRoturier#5109

                      Ah, by the way. If someone cough @Sara_Wilcox cough wants to review my novel here's the blablabla.

                      book cover

                      Title: Return of the Woodcutter
                      Genre: Fantasy (Action, Transmigration, Adventure, blablabla)
                      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/return-of-the-woodcutter_19721218806187705
                      Synopsis:

                      Iris, a foreign world engulfed in war, direly needs help. To replenish their troops and fight off horrors from the worst nightmares, the gods resurrect and summon living beings from another world: Earth.

                      Aito Walker, a broken man, is one such ordinary being amongst many others. Upon his revival, he will be put to the test during deadly trials.

                      He will start with almost nothing. No overpowered magic, no cheat skills, no-nonsense divine armors, no godly weapons. Only a peculiar system, increased strength and his wits as the best weapon.

                      Bearing a sin—he could not, cannot, and will not forget—haunting him to this day, Aito will strive to regain what little honor he has left.

                      He will suffer. He will fail. Taking advantage of his weaknesses, pain, anguish, sorrow and fear will gnaw at his sanity.

                      But a powerful yearning will keep him from falling apart. An ever-burning flame melting away the despair and welding back the broken pieces of courage.

                      A single desire.

                      “I will find redemption no matter the cost.”

                      ...

                      ...

                      ...

                      Or not, hun, who knows? The book isn’t done yet. Haha—

                      SLAP!

                      “Who put this guy in the synopsis narration!? Get him out of here and launch the warnings! Now!”

                      WARNINGS:

                      • Update schedule: 5 times a week. No updates on the weekend (MY TIME ZONE, meaning it might not be your time zone.) It WILL change if the book gets ENOUGH SUPPORT.

                      • You will find a few typos, grammatical and wording issues, that’s certain. There are issues in almost every book on this website. I'll do my best to bring you guys quality content and such issues will either be nonexistent or extremely few. However, one man can only do so much. If I get enough support, I’ll hire an EDITOR that will look at the chaps with a fresh eye. And POOF! Issues no more. Improved quality. Happier author and reader. Not sure if the editor will be happy tho.

                      • If the book is to your liking, do add it to your library and maybe drop a few (A LOT) of power stones. Since I’m taking part in the WSA event, it is a welcomed help.

                      • The first three chapters are fast-paced as to quickly get into the nitty-gritty but slow down afterward to give the story the time it needs to progress accordingly.

                      • The book can, never mind, it will contain “strong” language, gore and violence.

                      • Comedy, as you know it (and if you don’t, now you know) is subjective. So you might not like the jokes.

                      • I do not own the cover. If the original owner sees it and is displeased with his work being displayed here, send me a mail: writer.yoanroturier@gmail.com

                      • By the way, if any of you are willing the provide me with an original cover picture, I’ll be really, extremely, immensely thankful. (The possibility of that happening is downright impossible tho.)

                      • If you truly read that until the end you have my virtual congratulations ‘cause I sure as hell wouldn’t have done that.

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