Yulainei This... will take sometime mate. I have five other reviews besides yours and other stuff to do. So that will take time. And since I'm doing this for simple practice and fun, humm well you know. Try to ask someone else for a review. If by the time I'm done with my other honest reviews then ok, I'll do yours. But don't expect that to happen before... let's say two weeks?

    Yoan_Roturier looks like he's getting tons of requests for honest reviews, so feel free to send your requests to me as well.

      Yoan_Roturier

      You shouldn't try to explain that basic knowledge of literature/advertising/photography/etc. to some 'authors' :)
      Some time ago I tried to explain the basics of creating a plot, differences between the theatrical play and literary text, and other knowledge needed to build interesting action, etc... but most of the 'authors' know theirs 'literary rules'.
      When asked how many books they read in the last month, or last year, the answer was "I don't have time for this".

          Epyonnn

          Do you like fantasy? Honestly, it's not my cup of coffee; I finished my adventure with fantasy literature on the books written by Tolkien and Julius Verne many years ago.
          Could you take a look at the story written by Udeju?
          It's nicely written so it's a pleasure to read it

              Jo_J

              Alright. I'll step on the brakes next time. Hum, I just thought it would be useful.

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                  Yoan_Roturier

                  in some groups on discord - yes, but not here. Sorry for the truth here ;)
                  but that's what it looks like. Waste of time :(
                  You can create a group on discord with that knowledge.

                      Jo_J
                      Haha already have one. Members aren't much active as of now. They're all busy with some real-life stuff and one guy is a webnovel top 200 author, thus quite busy, so he won't speak unless addressed to.

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                          Yoan_Roturier
                          Lol... someone's keeping a grudge!😂😂😂

                          I know Jo_J . She's an absolute sweetheart. She already reviewed my book, and I did hers. In fact, the comment you're keeping a grudge with me about was made in course of my reading up her novel so I could give an accurate review... a lovely novel by the way.💕

                          Jo_J Be a dear and ask Yoan_Roturier to please forgive me for going against his divine opinions with my own divine opinions😂

                          All I said was there was nothing wrong with her sentence, and you legit exploded on me🤣😂 I was so shocked, I couldn't even reply!

                          Jokes apart, I'm really sorry my comment upset you. We're on the same side, you know? In fact, you'd corrected her on earlier comments and I supported your corrections by liking your comments because those corrections needed to be made.
                          But I legit saw absolutely nothing wrong with that sentence in particular. In my opinion, a correction was not really necessary.

                          Thank you so much for the detailed book cover analysis.💕 It's got technicalities I never knew about and I'm glad to learn of these things.
                          Concerning the little writeup on it... I left it on because I simply did not have the time to work on that, and I kinda wanted to leave a little bit of book cover credit to the original creators of the image. Silly me!😄
                          I would try to make out time to get it done, but if someone could be an angel and do it for me, I'd be most grateful.

                                    Jo_J
                                    Haha alright, write down your Discord tag, I'll send you an invite there.

                                    @SpilledInk Hahaha it's fine, already forgotten. :P
                                    Yeah.... sorry about the explosion...
                                    As for the original owner's credit, you can add it to your synopsis. You're not silly, just wanted to do good by the original owner ;)

                                    Glad it helped a bit.

                                        Dear Ladies SpilledInk and Gentelmen Yoan_Roturier (two lions jumping for each other's throats?)
                                        What are you talking about?
                                        I don't mind if you share your views somewhere here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/anemones_20040643706911505

                                        English is not my first language and I make a lot of errors (the editor deals with it...), so... I don't really care about comments like yours SpilledInk ;)

                                        Yoan_Roturier
                                        Jo_J#8824

                                                  SpilledInk

                                                  Yeah... :) I am trying to get you a bigger audience ;)
                                                  You don't know the pleasure when you read a story and you don't have to think too much 'what the author wanted to say, etc...'
                                                  I know nothing about the fantasy genre. In my review I wrote what I saw, I wouldn't read 5-6 chaps if I didn't enjoy it.

                                                      Hey, guys. Please do check my story out. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I love writing it. Is it bad boy themed? Yeah. Do check it out. Vote and add to your collections if it suits your taste. Thank you all in advance.

                                                      Genre: Contemporary romance.

                                                      Title: Fading scars: scars of the past.

                                                      Synopsis: "I don't regret saving your life, but I do regret not dying in the process."

                                                      We all know of stories that the good girl manages to break the wall around the bad boy's heart.

                                                      This story is different.

                                                      Athena Hazel Brown is just like every other 17-year-old high school junior.

                                                      She goes to school, has good grades, cheers for her school's football team, and tries to stay out of the drama. What makes her different is the fact that she lost her family when she was 15. The once happy family life that she had known changed drastically overnight.

                                                      She was separated forcefully from her dad and had to live with her overbearing, controlling mother. The painful separation from her dad changed her view of people and the world. She refused to let anyone in. She prefers keeping them at arm's length.

                                                      What will she do when she has to work on a project with the school's bad boy, which might lead to him getting a little bit close? What happens when she sees the real Aiden that he had successfully hidden from the world?

                                                      Aiden Gabriel Knight is known as the school's bad boy, known for skipping classes and getting into trouble. Not to mention his cocky attitude, British accent, and magnetic charm, which seem to work on all other girls except Athena, who have succeeded in shielding herself from the world.

                                                      But when Aiden starts showing her his sensitive side( thanks to a project at school), Athena starts to see a different guy, a guy looking for his redemption under the hard exterior.

                                                      Will that be enough to convince her that he's the one guy worth breaking her rules for?

                                                      The book is written solely from the female lead's perspective. It's also divided into two parts.

                                                      Enjoy!!!
                                                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/fading-scars-scars-of-the-past._20066938906233605

                                                        You are the honest reviewer with many aspects of understanding of book, and things related to it.

                                                        I'm scared.

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