ArcaneDragon

Haha, our stories are kinda similar. Both our characters are a combination of a different mind and body, and they both take on a new name.

      luoshenhua But for my quality is worse :( I need to work on my language and vocabulary. I am writing it to practice. Probably I should first improve my language and then write but I learn more when I am actually writing. Your story is interesting and I read FL wuxia novels from time to time and I hope she won't end up like most of these FL with a magical pet and mysterious husband though haha! About the worlds in my novel the previous world was something like little more advanced Earth and a new world is more like world between Middle Ages and ancient times but the difference of fantasy/wuxia setting.

          luoshenhua
          Hi luoshenhua! I did a review for your book.
          Here's some additional feedback:
          As a fan of cultivation literature, I had no trouble understanding what you meant by the cultivation terms like
          "tribulation clouds", "heart devil", and "outer sect disciple" so I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about new readers?
          Maybe explain why lightening is striking her? If she passes the tribulation, where does she go? If she fails, what happens?
          Yep. In conclusion, for people familiar with the terms, it's definitely a good read!
          Hope this helps!
          Here is the link to my work:
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

              ArcaneDragon

              I think it's really cool that you're learning as you write! It'll be nice to see how you improve as your story progresses. Also, [spoiler alert kinda] but you won't have to worry about my FL having a romance for a good long while. I read a lot of ML wuxia novels so I'm kinda writing her as an FL with cultivation as the focus. No OP husband solving her problems for her.

                SimmeringHours

                Thanks for your feedback! I might add a glossary then, though tbh I might just copy and paste some of them from a glossary I use haha (I'll credit the site, of course). I left a review for yours, but aside from a few minor spelling and grammar errors, the story itself is really good!

                  fantasy_land

                  Thanks for your review! I dropped one for your novel, but it's only based on reading the first twelve chapters. Wanted to write the review ASAP so I don't just leave you hanging haha

                    Acutelittletrap
                    Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it. I think the synopsis can be changed.
                    I know that "inconvenient" is softer, but this a "Inconvenient" series of 3 books :)
                    I had written these with a concept in mind.

                        KoFu_ I reviewed your story. It's not some kind of blackmail. Story aroused my interest and I hope you will continue writing it. As for reviewing my story do as you wish.

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