NatsumeRikka

  • Jun 27, 2023
  • Joined Nov 26, 2018
  • Chryiss Welp. Now you made me cry happy tears. :joy_cat:

    And what's with necroing bygone users :laughing: Yeah. kind of miss those you mentioned no longer on the forums. Especially @NatsumeRikka. She was the first one to regularly read my Sunflower story. If it wasn't for her, I would've ditched it thinking it was a failure at chapter five.

    • I wasn't going to write anything at first because I'm a lazy potato who's also a chatterbox that sometimes says too much. XP But now I feel compelled to join due to y'all being so thoughtful, sweet, and funny, and in light of these current times, more positivity is nice.

      In alphabetical order because I like organization lol~

      @Cantiara Even before I got to know you, I always admired you for your poise and intellect on the forums––aaand probably my bias for Totoro helped a bit too haha ;p––and now knowing you better, my appreciation and fondness for you have since grown tremendously. Sincerely and deeply, thank you for being such an awesome role model and friend :heart: :hugging: I admire, respect, and love you lots and think you're even more talented than you let on~ I feel like you're already very grounded in life, and the confidence in yourself is admirable, but still, wishing you all the best in life!! <3
      @Enlightened_Being Dude, I miss you! Where have you been? You teased us all with a drop by on the WHT thread and then vanished again! I missed the conversations we had (mainly with schreient and Veronica) in the early-middle days of that thread back before most of us poofed on a hiatus and many didn't return. ;-; Thank you for being so supportive and honest with great writing and life advice, and just an overall great guy. :grin: You're seriously so cool, well-spoken, friendly, and thoughtful. I enjoy hearing your perspective and ideas, and cough~ (psst, add me on Discord at Chryiss#5534 even if you're too busy to chat, even saying hi to show that you're alive would be great ;w; )
      @CCmei I kinda stalk your posts on the tea thread because they're always so interesting, and I hope to be able to converse with your more because I think you're pretty cool, sweet, and humorous! You have an aptitude for writing with a great positive attitude that will definitely get you far!
      @chonnie I think of you as the historical face-slapping writer-queen xD because of the stories you write which are honestly great. You also made purdy book covers for a short spell, and I'm also sad that you poofed too, but I hope you're doing well along with your stories that deserves more recognition. ;w;
      @Clowniac I always saw you as some mythical rare spirit on the forums (I'm not sure how else to phrase this lmao!), and admired you for the rare times you spoke and offered great advice and well-composed responses. Now I see you're just a normal human (lol!) but a very multi-talented guy that I still admire a lot. Thank you for being such a rock and genuine person whom I'm glad to know. :grin: You're doing fine without my best wishes for you in life as you're confident and have a wide array of skills and business acumen lol, but I still hope that you (and your family) will enjoy great success and have a wonderful life.
      @GrumpyNeighbor Aka the writer with the best cat story to have ever graced this Earth except for Erin Hunter, LOL. I think of you as an old, mysterious soul, and hope that you're happy and doing well. I'm so glad that you've been keeping up with writing Purrfect Cat Guy as it's one of my favorite contest and original story favorites!
      @ihateyounot You're such a devious but pure little soul at the same time xD and someone whom I'm so glad to have met. :heart: You're super kind and silly at times too, but also serious when necessary. And I love all that about you and the fun convos that we've had and with others. You're an awesome writer, managing to be 'controversial' yet in a thought-provoking and sorta brilliant kind of way. I think of your story as the epitome of what other similar genre stories ought--oh wait, positivity, uh-uh, we don't go there, lol! In short, you're amazing! And I look forward to our exchanges in the future and also wish you an amazingly fun and happy future!
      @WithJ I'm still touched to this day by your genuine review and encouragement on my novel when I was feeling down about it. ;w; Thank you for your honesty and supportiveness, and just being so real and compassionate. You're a great writer--I'm so happy to see that you're still writing and got more recognition for your novel--and I only wish you the very best. :heart:
      @kazesenken You're that forever young uncle who manages to get us face-palming yet also laughing. xD You're a steady presence while also being unexpected at times, all in good ways. And I really appreciate you being a cool goof that's also a genuinely awesome person---who's in fact good at writing!! (I'm coming for that scientist story, just you wait ;p) I've also decided to call you menbun, no objections!! :joy:
      @Lilliny Honestly, I previously used to be a little intimidated but also awed by you on the forums, but now that I know you, you're just a soft goofball at heart. xD :heart: I'm not sure how to best describe your singular personality; I simply just appreciate you being you, unabashedly so~ You're an amazing, fun, cool individual, and I wish you great success in life and an exciting future for you that matches the brightness of your rainbow blob emojis. :laughing:
      @LostInFictions Uwah! I just wanna pinch your cheeks, send you a thousand hugs, and enjoy pretty scenery with you because oddly enough, I always think of beautiful scenery when I see your name or talk with you. xD Maybe it's because you're a beautiful person whom I admire for your strength and perseverance, and positivity with others despite some of the ugliness in the world. You deserve everything and more, and I hope one day I'll be able to read a proper length story of yours~ :heart:
      @MyCharacterLeads Tbh, I just straight up think of Noblesse every time I think of you--not just because it's your profile pic, but also because it matches you. :joy: You have a refined way about you, but it's also very cute in a friendly, nice kind of way, just like Raizel! I appreciate your help and encouragement with my novel, and it's been fun simply talking with you too! I hope you're doing well and having fun! :grin:
      @NatsumeRikka Bohoo~ where are you amazing girl? I enjoyed all our conversations together and us supporting one another's novels. You're a great writer who makes the dopest badass FL's, ---seriously tho, you've elevated my bar for kickass females way too high lol!---and I wish you all the best in life and whatever you pursue. I hope all is well, and sending positivity and hugs your way~ :heart: Catch me on Discord at Chryiss#5534 and I'll come running~ If you ever need anything, I'll be here to support you! :blush:
      @Overlord_Venus You've been around for a while since I first joined (this site? and) the forums, but I've only just recently witnessed first hand your great writing and storytelling skills. It's nice to see you being active these days as I enjoy all the fun threads that you made---they put a smile on my face and make me laugh. I look forward to seeing where you go, as I believe you've got everything to go far, and to partake in any fun threads that you make in the future. xD
      @PsyberRose Your username matches you perfectly~ You're spunky, elegant, and kind with a little mysteriousness yet also down-to-earth. I'm so glad that your story got the recognition it deserves, and I hope you've been doing well with only happy times and fond memories. :blush:
      @Rak0 cries Huhu, why you enjoy poofing so much like a fluffy ninja! I miss your randomness on the forums, and your vibrant, authentic, and humorous personality. Thanks for all the smiles, laughs, and good memories on the WHT thread and forum in general. Hopefully we'll see you more active again one day, but no pressure, just enjoy life, stay happy, healthy, and random. xD You're amazing! Stay the awesome you! :grin:
      @schreient Waah~ </3 I miss you and all the fun and intriguing convos we've had on the WHT thread with the others about writing and life. You're a seriously amazing writer that makes me go wow and jelly sometimes at your skills. xD I hope your bby be happy and healthy along with you and your family. You're the perfect success story, and I'm so so happy that you got recognition for your writing! Also, I won't quote it, but you did say once to create a chat for us chatterboxes, so Imma hold ya to it (as I went on hiatus before :x) and ask you to add me on Discord at Chryiss#5534 :laughing: I hope you have an amazing, fun but peaceful life! :heart:
      @StenDuring I believe you're the first reviewer that I ever came across on this site that was genuinely good at it. I appreciate not only your review from when my story was just a baby, but also the many reviews of other stories in the community. I thought you had poofed around the time that most everyone did too, but I still see you around once in a while, so that's nice to see. :grin: You have a straightforward style and personality that I admire along with your tenacity and seriousness as a writer.
      @The_Cheese I knew you only for a short time, but it was a fabulous time. ;w; You and Rak's antics made me grin wider and laugh harder than anything else on the forums, and I honestly miss that short-lived time. Your identity is a mystery, lol, but wherever you are, and whatever you're doing, I wish you all the best in life. Thank you for your helpfulness on the forums and the brightness that you exuded in that short time of activeness. :blush:
      @Tomoyuki Before getting to know you, I saw you as one of the fabled greats on the website/forums lol! xD You speak very well, and I admired you for being able to express yourself and defend your beliefs. I still do, but now I know how misunderstood you are sometimes, and it makes me sad because you're honestly such a fluff-ball and good-natured, authentic person. You're truly an amazing human, and I admire your dedication and perseverance in writing and life. And anyone who insults you, I shall smack! xD Including yourself, lmao! So chin-up, you're awesome! :grin:
      @Gourmet_DAO You're so odd, but in the very best way possible, and I have no idea how to express your personality except in that way! Dx :joy: You make me tilt my head in confusion, grin, chuckle---you're just so unique and idiosyncratic, and I enjoy your randomness along with your thoughtfulness. I admire your dedication to your craft--historical really is a difficulty writing feat---and your presence on the forums is a subtle staple of the community. You're a special little star, and I appreciate the support you gave to me and the community and wish you a fantastic, engaging life!
      @ValKree You're honestly the most adorable little ball of sunshine and goofiness I've ever met. :heart: And as I said before, I live for your random thoughts thread. You demonstrate a deep, introspective mind that's both dark having seen and experienced the world, yet stayed so bright and lighthearted and shared that positivity and bounding, cute energy with all of us. I think of you like a cute little yellow chick with the spear of Valkyrie. xD Thank you for all the optimism and intrigue that you bring here! Stay awesome, stay you! :blush:
      @Veronica8 GRAH!!! Kitty! :heartpulse: I sincerely appreciate and love you so much~ uwu You're an amazing friend and hooman from the very beginning, and I'll forever be grateful and admiring of you for your support, honestly, level-headedness, and unearthly kindness (you're a literal freaking angel and anyone that degrades you I will come after with figurative flaming forks lmao!). We've had great convos about writing, life, hobbies, and interests like music, or just silliness and randomness---you basically hard-carried most of the WHT thread with me. xD And made me stay and return to the forums. :heart: And you deserve absolutely everything, all joy, fun, success, peace, and health. Thank you for being a literal role model human and an amazing friend! 💕
      @yaoyueyi I've admired you since your art cover days, and always wished to be your friend, lmao! because you were just so cool and talented. You were one of the greats (lol!) on the forum before and now even more so as the almighty helpful Yue-Bot! You have great sassiness yet also professionalism, and your talents and charisma will take you truly far in life---I just know that you'll have a very bright future ahead. :heart: You're hardworking and strive to do your best, and I wish you success not just in writing, but anything that you do with your creativity and imagination. Lastly... GOOSE! ....moth...haha! XP i'msorry--not--:joy: <no bread was injured in the typing of this comment>
      @Yuki_Qing You're the ancient wise grandmother of the forums in my eyes. And I don't mean that you're old lol! You're still youthful and peppy---I just respect and admire you. :blush: Although you're not on the forums much anymore, it's been fun getting to know you. Not only are you super helpful, but you're a wealth of knowledge! :sparkles: :O I think you're cool and nice, and one day, I'll watch all the dramas and other things that you've recommended (along with Yue).

      • @NatsumeRikka
        @GreatSage_Master1
        @Daoist_Food
        @cloudgugu
        @chonnie
        @Mechell_Advincula
        @K_A_U
        @Good_Light_Sleep

        I would like to do a review swap with you all. Am currently writing a quick transmigration novel.

        https://m.webnovel.com/book/13407968206765605

        Please do give my work a read.

        If you don't want to go through all the chapters, I would be much obliged if you read the chapters of the second arc from chapter 50 (nightmare) onwards and then write your review.

        Thanks in advance x

        • The Girl With Scars by @NatsumeRikka
          Is a body swap of a very original kind. The characters are well crafted individuals who aren't pussies so to speak. Lots of action, tension, some endearing moments.
          It's definitely worth the look.

        • hello guys! What happened today? i introduced my little one to crayons and coloring books, went to the kitchen for a while and came back to the living room with kiddie murals on my white wall TT__TT someone will be scrubbing the whole night

          @Chryiss sorry to hear about your dog. :(
          @Veronica8 wishing for things to get better for you. im just new and the silence was already making me sit in a corner and sulk what more others who have been here longer.
          @NatsumeRikka supporting your entry in the comp. gambatte

          • Deleted their original posts and moved the recommendations here.

            Destiny Forged @Reflex
            Video Games
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/13142328105838605/Destiny-Forged
            Read up to chapter 5

            • You have a nice writing style with your use of evocative language!

            • The VRMMORPG was explained clearly and had a nice game backstory

            • Jaden's hacking at the dummies reminded me of the Legendary Moonlight Sculptor


            My World To Live @Chryiss
            Fantasy
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/12836075506617305
            Read up to chapter it’s my story lol

            • Strong FL ftw
            • Sassy kitsune sidekick wooo
            • Magic battles with demons grawr!
            • handsome male traveling companion ;p
            • Is actually also a romance/sci-fi/action/adventure/mystery/drama mashup

            Honey: The Empire’s Treasure @mountwolf89
            Fantasy
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/12754799905072505
            Read up to chapter 60

            • apocalyptic Earth to spaceship to “Interstellar” movie like switch to Fantasy elven like people who eat diluted Ambrosia “honey”
            • Good MC with terrible luck and kick ass sweet cool fantasy mother

            The Girl with Scars @NatsumeRikka
            Fantasy
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/12598610905060305
            Read up to chapter 28

            • Two swapped MCs in two worlds!!
            • First FL MC is such a bad ass; I love her
            • Hilarity and chaos ensues in both worlds
            • I look forward to seeing how the worlds are brought together
            • Great writing and characters!

            Pinnacles’ Edge @PeachyPearl
            Romance Fiction
            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12905905906952205
            Read up to chapter 8

            • Smart FL lead that isn’t completely cookie cutter
            • Crime/illegal activities in a modern city setting for the romance, very different!
            • Writing is good overall with a nice amount of detail
            • Maybe I should properly review your novels guys... Like, read it until the lastest chapter and things. But my lack of focus didn't let me do that. If I can edit the review, I'll read your books until the end and fixed the review. Unless you're satisfied by my previous reviews, that is.

              Chryiss
              90751052
              @Nightmare_Taichou
              @NatsumeRikka
              ArinzeArimah
              Jamison_C
              MajestyGloxinia

              Sorry for the ping.

              • @NEidarous @fantasy_land @NguyenDynasty @shrishthi @MishaK @anne_2 @NatsumeRikka @Pgimz @Veronica8 @Eslyna @ArthurHFSS @Yozuka @WinterBud

                and also everyone else who is reading this post:

                Sorry to trouble you all but I have unexpectedly decided to join the Writing Prompts Contest #50:Mage with this title:

                Unmerciful Covenant: The magician, the monster and the witch.

                So would you please, please adn pretty please help me by spending a few precious powerstones in my story. I know that maybe I am asking too much... but after all, I am a shameless Author!

                This the link to my story.

                [link] https://www.webnovel.com/book/12805749805420705

                Thank you so much in advance!

                Thanks again!

                • @WinterBud
                  @GabrielDetchans
                  @Eslyna
                  @ArthurHFSS
                  @NatsumeRikka
                  @MishaK
                  @JunkieOverThe_Moon
                  @Pgimz
                  @90751052
                  @shrishthi
                  @anne_2
                  @PerishAndRuin
                  @Yozuka
                  @Nightmare_Taichou
                  As a the creator of this thread, I made a promise to myself that I will read everyone's book here and I very happy with that promise.
                  The talented writer I mentioned in this comment surprised me with their great work. I enjoyed every single one of your books. I liked how different and unique each story was (to be completely honest didn't read every chapter in every story but I truly enjoyed everything I have read this couple of days). I added your books to my Library and left reviews.
                  Hope you guys check mine too and leave a review.
                  (The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect)
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect

                  (The Infinite Duo: Perfect Strangers)
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/12690952406647405/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Perfect--Strangers

                  Will read and review the rest of the books later this week

                  • @NEidarous congratulations on a very succesfull thread! Shamelessness is overflowing here.

                    @ArthurHFSS Hi! I am glad you found it useful! The new synopsis is more interesting! Good work my friend!

                    @NatsumeRikka Then forget I said anything. I am really curious as to what the reason is. I would be eagerly reading your novel to find out. :D

                    @Yozuka review done! Nice story! Added to my collection!

                    @Pgimz you are next!

                    @Veronica8 Review done! I already had your novel "To My Sunflower (BL)" in my library before you even posted here so reviewing it was easy. Fun fact: I usually don't read boy love novels but the theme you selected enthralled me. You write in an amazing way. So please update more often!

                    @anne_2 i will read and review your story tomorrow, maybe sooner if I got the time.

                    @MishaK I will be reviewing your work after i am finished with @anne_2

                    If I am forgetting someone that had tagged me, please give me a reminder. Or do a review in my novel and I will be sure to return the favor.

                    • @NatsumeRikka Dear, I already reviewed your story. First of all, I want to say that like your story very much.Its very well written. But there is something I feel that you need to adress. A minor flaw in chapter 3 that can be easily fixed.

                      Since you stated that this is modern world, in actual Earth, this chapter has some credibility issues. And I am not talking about reincarnation. Also, I love Yi Lan and I understand that she is really tough and a complete badass.

                      However, a highschool girl won a fight against 20 burly man at the same time? And then she walked away after being shot twice? Don't you think its a bit too much? I feel that you should at least give a reasonable explanation for the mc to have this kinds of abilities. After all its a novel in the magical realism genre and not in fantasy.

                      Martial Arts won't cut it because you stated that she is living in the real actual world. Unless she is a cyborg or a cultivator or something powerful like that there is simply no way she could do those things. So you either remove the modern world tag you putted at the first chapter or you have to include a paragraph to explain her superhuman resistance and abilities.

                      For example, something like this:

                      "Since Yi Lan was born she had more strengh than normal people. The reality was that she had bones denser than average due to an excess of calcium, her skin was thicker than normal by an aditional layer and her kidney glands constantly generated a small amount of adrenaline. While medical science struggled to find a reasonable explanation for this anormalities, fortunately her family could provide her with the drugs needed to keep her condition in check.

                      However Yi Lan did not care about these things. What she did cared about was that she could summon a great deal of strengh at will and it was damn useful on the fights. Of course, her parents and siblings worried a lot about this. Specially since they found out that because her pain threshold was a lot superior that normal people it was common to her to ignore all wounds until it was too late."

                      Hope you will find this feedback and suggestions useful. Again, I love your story. you definitely got yourself a new reader. Keep up the good work!

                      • @NatsumeRikka @GabrielDetchans Left a review for your novels. Really interested in both, keep up the good works!


                        I'll use this thread to shamelessly promote myself as well!
                        A warning at the start: It is a Fan-Fiction novel.

                        Douluo Dalu - The Story of Sheng Feilong

                        Synipsis:
                        A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction in the timeline of DD3 (The Legend of the Dragon King).

                        Follow Sheng Feilong, a young boy from the Sheng Clan, on his way to become a powerful Soul Master.

                        Watch him grow up, train, make friends and enemies alike, in, arguably, one of the most interesting worlds of chinese webnovels.

                        Will the outcast of a small Clan be able to break through humanity's limit and ascend to become a god?

                        Link >> https://www.webnovel.com/book/12199865805072905

                        • Hi people! This thread is growing steadily ! Glad to meet all the shameless colleagues here.

                          @WinterBud I finally did the review of your novel. Although i did not read the whole story yet, i do read it until chapter 15 to have a broad enough look at the story. I like it ! I am still reading the rest of the chapters but i wanted to enjoy the story as a reader and that why I decided to review it today. Your story is right on track anyway and you already have a lot of feedback of your readers. The chapter you ended with SCUMM! shout made me laugh a lot.

                          @Eslyna @ArthurHFSS @NatsumeRikka You people are the next on my queue of pending reviews! I will try to review your work as soon as possible!

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