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As a the creator of this thread, I made a promise to myself that I will read everyone's book here and I very happy with that promise.
The talented writer I mentioned in this comment surprised me with their great work. I enjoyed every single one of your books. I liked how different and unique each story was (to be completely honest didn't read every chapter in every story but I truly enjoyed everything I have read this couple of days). I added your books to my Library and left reviews.
Hope you guys check mine too and leave a review.
(The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect

(The Infinite Duo: Perfect Strangers)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12690952406647405/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Perfect--Strangers

Will read and review the rest of the books later this week

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    review done! I liked your story! Also, you asked for feedback so here it is:

    Your story is great but I think you should edit your chapters to fix some minor flaws in the narrative. For example:

    Chapter 1:

    Its a great chapter but the numbers seems odd, 1 million feet? 500 million feet? This beasts are of gargantuan size. And the locals don't find this strange?

    They just go on with their lives and say "hey look at the deities gathered over there" like that is the important thing and ignore the appearance of the damn huge dragon that is as big as to cover the entire sky with his shadow.

    If I were to see a beast like that suddenly appear I will surely show a reaction. Scream, ran away,faint, stare at it, I don't know exactly what reaction it would be but I would definitely show my emotions somehow. The locals should also do it. Even if you plan to kill them all in a couple of paragraphs later, at least make the reader feel like they were alive in the first place.

    Also even if the dragon's numbers are correct, its still better to give a description than to show numbers unless the mc is a reincarnated person from a modern world with a chip to measure everything.

    Chapter 9:

    Also a great chapter and the joke is good but mentioning steroids threw me off, I thought this was an ancient world so why the mc suddenly know about steroids?

    Replace the words"likes steroids" with "likes alchemy potions" or "like bloodline pills" or something like that. Also, in the subsecuent line replace the words "doing steroids" with "faking your strengh with forbbiden ways" or whatever you prefer.

    Chapter 12: mexican standoff? There is even Mexico in this ancient world?

    These examples are the kind of thing that you need to change to improve your story. Its a great novel already but it could be better if you fix these minor flaws. Hope you find the feedback useful! Keep up the good work!

    I've been away from the forums since last week! Aaaah, what's happened here? Hahaha. Thanks to those who'd already given mine a review, I'll make sure to return the favor soon, and I'll try to check out other works down the thread (probs when the weekend rolls in). Let's all keep at it, yeah? :grin:

    @NEidarous @fantasy_land @NguyenDynasty @shrishthi @MishaK @anne_2 @NatsumeRikka @Pgimz @Veronica8 @Eslyna @ArthurHFSS @Yozuka @WinterBud

    and also everyone else who is reading this post:

    Sorry to trouble you all but I have unexpectedly decided to join the Writing Prompts Contest #50：Mage with this title:

    Unmerciful Covenant: The magician, the monster and the witch.

    So would you please, please adn pretty please help me by spending a few precious powerstones in my story. I know that maybe I am asking too much... but after all, I am a shameless Author!

    This the link to my story.

    [link] https://www.webnovel.com/book/12805749805420705

    Thank you so much in advance!

    Thanks again!

      GabrielDetchans Review done! I already had your novel "To My Sunflower (BL)" in my library before you even posted here so reviewing it was easy. Fun fact: I usually don't read boy love novels but the theme you selected enthralled me. You write in an amazing way. So please update more often!

      Thank you for the feedback. I usually don't receive comments. It's common for my works to attract a lot of silence and high numbers of views. So, I can only assume people are actually reading by the consistent increase of views each day. If it wasn't for the views, I'd probably have an account full of hiatus stories. Unfortunately, nobody reads = nobody writes. I'm honest to say I need that motivation. So, thanks from saving Sunflower from ending up another hiatus story.

        ihi let me present you mine

        • Raising Child System (bl)

        no need to explain what a system novel is I think everyone know already : but mine is not a " help the male lead" "become the best" "last wishes system" but a .... RAISING CHILD SYSTEM. Enough of taking care of the second male lead : think more of the cute children witch we don't talk enough about ! so here is the raising child system to help young and cute child grow up to be a reliable and handsome male !

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12329032005277505/Raising-Child-System

          Hey, guys! I know this post isn't necessary, but I've found myself some time (finally) to read and review your promoted novels in this thread. Hopefully I can finish reading everything by today.

          I'm here to beg for forgiveness for any harsh reviews that might come your way or comments that may offend you in any way possible. I'm a bit particular about grammar, which is funny, since my own work has a lot of flaws. But I've been learning English practically my whole life, so I can get pretty critical with it. I'm not good at writing my own stories but I've been told that I can be quite the harsh critic (sorry for my impertinence). I don't expect you to return the... favour? If that's what you can call it... so don't feel too pressured.

          Do note that I'm a layman and thus my opinions does not matter. If possible, just ignore my reviews, please. ._.

          Apologies in advance for any rude or harsh remarks that may go your way. Really, I'm sorry.

          Thanks for recommending your works.

            ihateyounot As long as the feedback is constructive not destructive, that's all good. Constructive feedback is golden to an inspiring author.

            There's also providing feedback on the the story itself for plot holes, character impressions, flow and so forth. You can have a story that is grammatically sound, but lacks on storytelling conventions and mechanisms. Usually, this is more important to a writer than picking out their grammar. Grammar can be eventually fixed in final draft stages.

                Veronica8 That's true, but I'm quite petty so grammar is the first thing I notice in any works. It's a bad habit of mine. //sigh// It's mostly because I don't have much talent in storytelling so I can't be helpful to anyone since I lack the creative capacity to give that kind of constructive feedback. Case in point: my own novel can't hold a candle to a lot of novels in this thread in terms of creative richness. Yes this is me shamelessly plugging my own novel huehueh

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