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Aizukii dude, if you read what I previously said, you would realise I only hate the majority of system novels, those being fanfictions and originals. Personally I enjoy system novels greatly, but it depends on how the author situates the protagonists use of the system and if it's their main source of strength. If the sole reason for the protagonists strength is from the system, then it would be boring, take it away and their nothing. In contrast, protagonists that aren't solely powerful because of their system but their knowledge and their utilisation of it, like "The Legendary Mechanic" then it becomes enjoyable to read, not like those garbage fanfictions that solely rely on the use of systems.
Maverick82 True, having knowledge of the world or the future in general is enough, gaining a system or an advantage simply makes it boring and easy to predict the future direction of the novel.
RachelRuth if you already posted it, then share it, although I'm no one special, hopefully I can give some feedback.
kazesenken I tried royal road a few years ago and the originals on there were actually good.
itsmeTuba yeah true, you're right regardless if this is the dissing section. But you gotta realize, why should I hope when they don't even bother with creating a proper plot or grammar or character development, etc.
All they want is to satisfy their imagination in the form of words, hoping for others to relate. And that is why I hate. But I gotta say there are some pretty good original novels out there, im only dissing the majority here.
True, the art is incredible but the story is lackluster and boring. The summoning ability is cool but what light novel/web novel doesn't have that. Honestly, the only reason it's so popular is because of the amazing art and the protagonist being badass.
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True, the art is incredible but the story is lackluster and boring. The summoning ability is cool but what light novel/web novel doesn't have that. Honestly, the only reason it's so popular is because of the amazing art and the protagonist being badass.
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I just wanna say, stop FUCKING ADDING TRASH NOVELS INTO MY FUCKEN LIBRARY.
IT'S RUINING MY FUCKING LIBARY.Whoever thought of this function, you must be a fucken genius to want me to read these fucken premium novels. Even if I were to read these novels, you honestly think I'll read it on this site? Don't kid yourselves, I'll probably read it on a pirated website.
Wait, is that possible? Nah, these novels are probably too shit to be pirated anyway.There's a reason why traditionally published novels are pirated and originals on this website aren't. Please keep it that way.
Thanks man.
kazesenken Yeah but for your more recent novel, I also wouldn't read it cause of:
The title, no hate, but light novel titles, the title that you made was what got me into reading web novels in general. So whenever I see a similar title, I avoid it, simply cause it reminds me of the past.
I like the use of volumes in the synopsis, but that's not for me. I honestly don't care that you're trying to give the reader an easier time of what's happening, but a synopsis is a short intro to your story, and that is not an intro.
The volumes are way too detailed.
Ugh... First-person, that's an instant drop for me. I just don't like the first person in general.
You got some chunky paragraphs there (in the chapters).
It's an isekai.
Some good sentence structure and grammar but you should work on your paragraph structure. Their a bit too chunky for me.
Overall, compared to the trash novels I read on this site, yours is incomparably better. But no, it doesn't pique my interest cause these types of novels are the ones I absolutely fucken detest. In general though (no hate to you :) ).
You deserve those reviews as well, some shitty novels I read honestly don't...The quality of standard, that the readers on this site have are simply pathetic.
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kazesenken Right off the bat I wouldn't read it because of reasons that are the:
Title - Otherworld Isekai Service. Just no.
Synopsis is a bit too long.
There's comedy, I enjoy serious synopsis'
You continued to use the quote in the synopsis with no spacing. Always start a new sentence when using a quote or simply separate the quote.
The last three words are "path of carnage" has no relation to the title or the synopsis you written. I would understand if it was like "path of regaining a human body" or something but path of carnage doesn't relate whatsoever.
"After getting killed in an accident" first several words, drop for me cause the route is so overused. You don't even have to give a reason, just transmigrate him into a truck with like a mental message or something.
Use of questions. I get you're trying to grab the audience's attention but that's an instant drop for me.
Also you used Kami-san, which I'm guessing is a god of sort and as an apology, he transmigrates him to another world. With what I said before, I fucken hate when authors go for the God route or whatever interdimensional being interferes with the protagonist's death.
When I'm checking someone's work, I check the titles and you used question marks and single letters. I like serious titles.
The titles don't grab my attention.
I read a bit and it's good, you used quotations, which is good, you're not like those shitty, lazy authors.
Yeah, I skimmed through you're novel and the grammar and the sentence/paragraph structure were good. But I won't read it simply cause I don't like these types of novels. I enjoy more serious novels. :)You might think these reasons are bullshit, but these are just my opinions and you got 69k views so you're doing something right.
FUCKKKK I REVIEWED THE WRONG ONE.
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A good system novel for me would that it would go into detail, like the way the system is structured, novels like "The legendary mechanic". That novel is detailed as fuck, you can tell how much effort the author put in. However, I generally don't enjoy original system novels as I believe it's the easy route in writing a novel, (you just gather the amount required, and you gain the ability/power with no explanation given, it just happens, it's pathetic), except for traditionally published novels, the authors do it for a living so they're generally well written and structured, and they also give some background information about the ability gained. It's somewhat like the system isn't even necessary for these protagonists, those are the readable ones for me.
As for the quality of the novels, even when the "write your own novel" function came out, the quality was still lackluster compared to the traditionally published novels, and even now the quality is pathetic, some novels ranked high on the leaderboard use colons, not quotations, FUCKEN COLONS.
For sentence structure and paragraphs, the ones I read tend to have max 7-8 sentence paragraphs, but those only occur 3-4 times in a chapter and the rest are relatively short with 3-4 sentences. But, the novels I read, the grammar, in general, is good, the authors know what they're doing, so it's readable, unlike some shitty authors on this site.
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Pleasedeteme isn't is obvious why it's popular? Because people like it. They like the plot, the writing style, the characters, the world building. We all have different opinions, I didnt like it the moment it said it was an "infant to supreme magus" journey.
How the fuck would I know its flaws? Like I said before, if I don't like the sypnopsis then I don't read it. I call it trash because it's my opinion, simple as that.
Pleasedeteme I can neither agree or disagree with you cause I have no idea what the fuck you're saying. Instead of all this bs, tell me straight up.
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Pleasedeteme nah that's the very embodiment of trash
kazesenken True
kazesenken
Idk much in relation to writing as I'm a reader myself, but readers are getting angry possibly because your protagonist isn't doing anything that is productive that gives them any benefit. Or, you can show the audience the protagonists thought process, to know his plans for the future, whether that's training, recruiting, developing skills, ways to master that one skill, etc.I don't know your story so I can't give you much advice, but you can tell them to just fuck off and that it's your story.
heyitsbluejay That's good cause that creates character development, which isn't seen in most original isekai novels.
Personally I'm not a big fan of isekai novels but for me it's always the grammar, I always read the synopsis or the short prologue, as it gives me an idea of their literacy level, idc if English is their first or second language, if it's shit then I'm not gonna stoop to their level to read it. So always proof read and ask others to beta read your novel. Also, make sure your synopsis isn't shit, don't make it first or second person, make it third, get ideas from Chinese authors, they do this for a living.
Also, one of the biggest reasons why I stopped reading isekai novels in general was because the protagonist were always fucken pussies, they were literally bitches of the female lead, it's pathetic. (I'm not an advocate for male supremacy but when you write like that, it's kind hard not to)
Idk much cause I don't read that many isekai novels in general but for me its always the mentality/attitude of the protagonist and the grammar (also use paragraphs, don't be that dick that makes it hard for the audience to read)
Make it logical.