Does anyone know how to use bold letter or italics on Inkstone?
Review Swap (Screw it, just be shameless)
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Acutelittletrap I believe you need to bring it over by using another site since inkstine doesn’t use bolds or italics yet, I forgot what the site was though.
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hmm ill try google docs. =]
Acutelittletrap okay, also I’ll probably delete the comment later if you would like, or if you want to us it for reference I’ll leave it there or post it here
UnjustlyUnderpaid
Thanks =]
I agree with what you said, so much.
Some of the wording should be edited.
What you said about the guild so true I missed a really good chance at showing that emotion/boosting word count =].
I was concerned about the setting, was it to much or to little? I was trying to sneak information about the area here and there.
stalls, bathhouse, resting on marble little things like that, not sure if it went well.
Thanks for your review it means so much.
UnjustlyUnderpaid I shall copy it, I would be honored if you took it down =]
My shame should be hidden.
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Acutelittletrap the setting is too little BUT BUT this is chapter one and a world isn’t built in one chapter. You have plenty of time to add/build more to the setting in future chapters.
I’m deleting the comments in 3 minutes
New author here. I wish every senpai in this forum a relaxing and enjoyable holiday season, and an amazing New Year!
My work is called When the Emperors Return.
Let's exchange reviews to pump the reviews number up!! 
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Thanks =]
I assume you mean grand scale
I was talking about the small things, like where the action is taking place, like if I should of wrote more/less about the jail/barracks.
Also on the comment you made about wisdom and stuff,
Is it more interesting if I made it super complex?
I was really going with a simple system like in Skyrim HP-Mana-Stamina.
Acutelittletrap oh in which case, you could do with a bit more details but not too much. Honestly what you had so far was pretty okay
SimmeringHours
Would you like a star review or a critique?
I'd get 2 stars =]
Acutelittletrap
Hi Forsaken123, I'm the first to write a review. Woohoo! Proud of myself.
Could you give me some feed back on my novel too? Thanks in advance.
Here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105
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SimmeringHours
Do, you want a real review or just a boot licking?
As for your question.
My answer is Asuna.
I read C1, and there is no detail about the environment, also it lacks a hook.
I don't really understand your synopsis?
It sound like a ton of world building, what kind of story is this?
Hi guys.. I would like a review too. This is the first novel that I am writing. Here's the link :
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12186924305054405
I will get onto yours later! Thanks! 
Acutelittletrap
a real review here would be great
Acutelittletrap
Thanks for the advice. Now that you mention it, I realize the lack of hook too.
I'll probably have to change the synopsis to make it more clear too.
Yep. There is a lot of world building. Basically a village boy given the burden to revive powerful peace seeking individuals to end the world war.
UnjustlyUnderpaid
A critique would be great. Thank you!