I agree with what you said, so much.
Some of the wording should be edited.
What you said about the guild so true I missed a really good chance at showing that emotion/boosting word count =].
I was concerned about the setting, was it to much or to little? I was trying to sneak information about the area here and there.
stalls, bathhouse, resting on marble little things like that, not sure if it went well.
Thanks for your review it means so much.