_Rain I posted a review for you. Dude, I'm not a romance story person, but your novel is great. Realistic and interesting. You just gained a new reader besides the review. Keep it up!

You already know my novel, and did a review a long time ago, so I'm not gonna bother. Just wanted to say you are insane, and good luck :D :D :D

    VateRise I would truly appreciate honest feedback, I’m always looking for people able to give me advice or criticism. You have my thanks. Amidst the sand

      VateRise Try mine, Duality.

      The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

      From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

        [unknown] The review is ready. Boy, you have loads of work in front of you. I wish you all the best still.

          Ehmmm my synopsis a bit too long and I only have posted 2 chp and both are some prologue chapter where I tell a bit of back story. I'm planning it do a 3 chp back story before the true action begins ( 1 more chp before the action).
          A chapter of mine is at minimum 1000 word.

          Link->Overturning Fate(~journey in another word~)

          Tell me whether or not I should change anything (including novel name, synopsis, etc, ) thx

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