I want to give free review but-
Curse the Mainframe!
Thanks in advance! I've been looking for a constructive review :)
https://m.webnovel.com/book/13460157606934905
My book is called way to the heavens and is an eastern fantasy. I want to improve as a writer so please give me an honest review.
CCmei
I honestly love long winded and constructive reviews (also because I tend to do this as well). I don't see a point in really short and all most kiss-uppy types of reviews that give the author no way to tell if what they are writing have actually have an impact/what they could improve upon. A good writer should be able to take criticism and use it to better their books. Not try and give a false advertisement of what their book really is by hiding the bad reviews.
I'll give my two books, feel free to review on either of them.
first one: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11799717406527805/book-3-Years-Later
it's about a girl struggling to fill in the gaps of her memory and having to cope with a decaying world. (I'm gonna be starting book 2 soon so I'd love your opinion on this on)
second one: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11237922105308805/Input-Log-Dates
A collection of stories about people trying to survive and make sense of what's happening to them. (much longer but you can start at any volume)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376214406229405/The-Soldier-Turned-Hero.
Synopsis
Colonel Shepherd was in the midst of a mission while He was covering the retreat of his comrades that's when he was hit by a stray bullet and died or He should have but he awakened in another world and the first sentence that he heard was "All Hail The Hero"!!
This is the story of a Soldier Turned Hero!
This is my first book and in fantasy genre any criticism will be highly appreciated
Thank You!
Hello, I would really like to hear your opinion.
My book Black or White.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14803727506746405
People are born as white sheet, later the world will leave some colour to it. Black or White? Salvation or Destruction?
Hi! Try mine? I would gladly appreciate it if you could also take the time to read and review mine too.
Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12173699206035605/You-Of-All-People
Don't worry my heart can take it if it means I'll learn and grow as a writer. Constructive Criticism is good at showing areas that needs improvement. Thank you.
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Wow you're a pretty productive writer!
I just posted the review for the first link, which is your shortest and lastest novel "Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana."https://www.webnovel.com/book/15016935306579805/Supernatural-Investigation-101%3A-Chronicles-of-Nakashima-Wakana and will get to the rest as soon as I read a substantial amount to make a fair review.
I put it under a 'spoiler' even though there are none to not impact your readers in any way. Thank you for allowing me to review honestly.
CCmei Thank you for taking time to provide the honest constructive review that is going to help me improve I will work on the issues that you pointed out (_)
CCmei I would like one https://m.webnovel.com/book/14677732005267405
CCmei I've noticed the summary's problem, but always thought that rewriting the prologue was more important. I've got some ideas for the prologue, but somehow always draw a blank on the summary which, in theory, should be easier.
These are my current writes. I need the reviews, so to know where I'm leading, no matter how harsh. So, here goes...
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14712612905380405/Avoiding-Love
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14885996705001605/Stardom-Gone-Wrong-(Reader-X-Yandere-Males)
Go ahead! Give your best... or worst. Comments r so scarce for me anyway...
CCmei Here's mine, I'll be really glad if you review it.
The author has just replied and I'll be posting the review shortly for: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13271529106326605
Well okay, that was a really short read so the review is up. I personally didn't like it but good luck.
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https://m.webnovel.com/book/14883767205991405
Lay it on us UwU, we still early into it thou.
CCmei well seeing as getting my work dissected painfully will probably give me more pointers for how to improve my writing for future installments/stories than the 'reviews' from swaps that may not even read it, sure give me your worst.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14843435505807405/Kitsune---An-eventfull-time-abroad
Short Synopsis: There were somethings Laura expected to happen during the first week of ehr exchange semester in Japan. Meeting new people, bureaucracy, getting lost on campus and a hike through the nearby japanese alps. which lead to the unexpected events of which meeting a talking Tanuki was just the very first.
Please do
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13968510106766605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4304253660
I hope you like it
And i wont mind if it is harsh, as long as it is honest
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CCmei @Bnhhas341
If you're just going to delete the review why did you bother asking me for one? Why waste people's time? I could have spent that time thinking a critical review and analysis to do some else's
That's very petty of you and a reflection of you own character. I've noticed another reviewer was also deleted. Thus would not be an issue if you didn't promo and beg people to check out your work. If you are just going to delete all reviews that are not your spam accounts do not waste people's time.
Update: wow the user deleted their own post.