fantasy_land Just saw your post now. And nah I don't like to force anyone into reviewing. My previous post was only a joke.
And I only reviewed your novel because I thought it was interesting and...............short.

    MishaK
    The lack of a picture, and the first sentence of your synopsis. really turned me away from reading it.

    A doctor with a bright future, Sneha wants more for her life than a traditional woman. But at the same time her father is keen on marrying her quickly and having a well settled life.

    This could read much better if it was presented like so
    Sneha was a doctor with a bright future, and she wanted to be the best doctor in the world, but her father wanted to marry her away.

    Why? Just so that she can be a kept woman.

    As for your title, "incovenient" is a bit of a soft word, if possible make it stronger.

    Perhaps "The unfortunate wife?"

    Also there is two errors in your first sentence in your synopsis.

    But at the same time, <--- comma the other one is , and {having a well settled life}

    Perhaps you meant giving her a well settled life? I don't really know

        MishaK I wrote a review on your novel. The world setting is in some country like where parents decide about the marriage of children. It's weird for a person from Europe like me. I don't have much time now but when I get some time I will read the rest of your story. I need to prepare some chapters of my own novel. (Being university student sucks sometimes!)

          Hihi! Reply to this and drop your book if you wanna review swap!

          This is a xianxia novel with a female mc. There's only 6 chapters at the moment, so it should be pretty quick to get through. It starts off as a pretty standard cultivation novel, but I hope that it's interesting enough that people wanna read more!

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/12532976806786105/Memories-Blossoming-in-the-Jianghu

            ArcaneDragon

            Haha, our stories are kinda similar. Both our characters are a combination of a different mind and body, and they both take on a new name.

                luoshenhua But for my quality is worse :( I need to work on my language and vocabulary. I am writing it to practice. Probably I should first improve my language and then write but I learn more when I am actually writing. Your story is interesting and I read FL wuxia novels from time to time and I hope she won't end up like most of these FL with a magical pet and mysterious husband though haha! About the worlds in my novel the previous world was something like little more advanced Earth and a new world is more like world between Middle Ages and ancient times but the difference of fantasy/wuxia setting.

                    luoshenhua
                    Hi luoshenhua! I did a review for your book.
                    Here's some additional feedback:
                    As a fan of cultivation literature, I had no trouble understanding what you meant by the cultivation terms like
                    "tribulation clouds", "heart devil", and "outer sect disciple" so I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about new readers?
                    Maybe explain why lightening is striking her? If she passes the tribulation, where does she go? If she fails, what happens?
                    Yep. In conclusion, for people familiar with the terms, it's definitely a good read!
                    Hope this helps!
                    Here is the link to my work:
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

                        ArcaneDragon

                        I think it's really cool that you're learning as you write! It'll be nice to see how you improve as your story progresses. Also, [spoiler alert kinda] but you won't have to worry about my FL having a romance for a good long while. I read a lot of ML wuxia novels so I'm kinda writing her as an FL with cultivation as the focus. No OP husband solving her problems for her.

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