MedusaDiva I have also decided to review your novel. So far it is pretty good but there are just to few chapters for me to judge it completely. I worked with what I had and the first 4 chapters Are really good in my opinion.

Just read it over a bit to see if you find any grammar errors and out of curiosity is a pallast the same as a palace?

Maybe same thing in different language?

DeJeL

gusdefrog

I finished my reviews so I’ll give you a short summary:

“You’re both much better than me, deje has a low score for update stability but other than that everything in both of your novels are solid and great.

I have nothing to say or advice to give and bless me with 1/100 of your writing skills I beg of thee.”

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