talesofgrae Why have you not been active in soo long?
Review Swap (Screw it, just be shameless)
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David_Tieku Both of our novels are the same theme. Yay!
Anyway, please check mine out. Your novel is already on my reading list as I dig these kinds of novels.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11560442206422205/Dream-Stage
You don't have to leave reviews on its page. Just feedback on this thread below is fine. But if you insist, be my guest.
https://forum.webnovel.com/d/13551-please-review-my-novel-dream-stage
Also @DeJeL , please put my novel in your queue. Graci!
cola_addict Added to my queue, #23.
Please check out [my novel(https://www.webnovel.com/book/10514883206053905/What-in-this-world!-Oh...-Wait-a-minute.-It's-another-world.)
I try to review at least one novel per day
Tag me any time to find out where you are on my queue.;,;.
Wassup
I'll just promote my novel here!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11739876506499905/Dark-Lord-of-Tartarus
OP MC and Servants, I hope you give it a chance.
Well I'm hoping to get views and reviews from posting in this thread, so yeah I hope you'll read my novel.
Come to think of it, I think I already posted here.. hmmm, nevermind :)
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I'm gonna shamelessly promote my novel, first thing's first, I made my novel for writing prompt contest #20 in which I garnered fifth place. Out of the first five places in the competition, I am the only one still continuing my novel. Here goes!
Novel: Second Chance War
Synopsis: If you had the ability to go back in time and change history would you? Even if it was by complete accident? Thomas Conlin is a soldier of the U.S. Army in WWII who has participated in every major action up to D-day. During the Normandy Invasion Thomas dies on the first day, but a crazy german science experiment that takes place at the same time goes horribly wrong, resulting in Thomas's soul being yanked back through time to just a few months before Pearl Harbor. With his memories and skills intact, Thomas vows to change the course of the war using everything he's got. He's got a second chance, he's going to use it to change the war.
Be aware that it is NOT entirely historically accurate, as there are large amount of sci-fi happenings that I tie into the store in a somewhat neat ribbon. Book has undergone two name changes and two synopsis revisions. Please be aware that the current cover art is not the final cover art.
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Tearing_Sanctuary I think you write well and have good ideas. Where it lacks in maturity (it's clear you're just starting out and will get better with time), it makes up for it by being good, interesting and exciting!
Keep writing. You'll improve if you just keep at it.
Some areas to improve.
Sentence structures can be improved to make the flow smoother - re-read your sentences, it will help in structuring better.
Spend some time giving your characters emotions - and then show the reader what's happening in those emotions by writing theur reactions. You are already doing it here and there; it would help to give the conversations and battles more flavour.
Edit: the "I must leave now" at the end of chapter 1 was pretty exciting. I was wondering what good plot twist was coming to drive the story forward. But when it turns out the reason is "my reason for leaving is I want to see the world and I don't value my friendships enough" - that was pretty big a let down.
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Synopsis
It feels like an eternity since Eika's life play out like a broken record. A world where idols are the next big thing and, yet Eika is stuck in an ice cream store wondering when the time will strike at 4 pm where her life would go back to the usual cycle she calls as 'life routine'
However, this routine is shattered when the world's one and only idol academy announced that they will hold auditions to be the next big thing.
1000 Applicants. 700 students approximate. Only 50 gets to debut.
Can she make it?
I know this book probably has a weird concept but that's what fiction is for right? This book is inspired by several Japanese and Korean media for 'idols'
This book is magical realism with a mix of comedy and drama in it. (After all, this is a competition between several girls and boys as well)
I'll be grateful if anyone of you takes the time to give insight about the novel. I'll appreciate any critique or comments!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11929835505621905/Throne-for-The-Next-Idol-Queen
Ierrech oh... Thanks for your thoughts!
You're right, it's my first novel, so yeah
DeJeL Please review my novel? Tearing_Sanctuary
Hokobishu Added, #24 in queue
TawnyWrites Added, #26 in queue
Please check out my novel
I try to review at least one novel per day
Tag me any time to find out where you are on my queue.;,;.
Shamelessly advertising :joy:
Title: Apex System
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10690615405128905/Apex-System
Synopsis:
Hailed as a once-in-a-millennium genius, he was deceived and betrayed.
He lost everything, including his life.
However, Legends never die!
Armed with a system, reaching the apex is but a matter of time.
Follow the story of a legend as he carves an everlasting glory!
Just gimme a holler if you're up for some review swapping. ;)
NeverLost Sure!
Here's mine - will read yours now and review.
It is an honour to be reviewed by a great top 100 author!
I'm joining the shameless club too! I'm fairly new to this so I'm unsure of how to go about this: My book has only 3 chapters till now but constructive criticism would really help me developing it!
I might be a little delayed but I'm up for the review swap and I'll totally read your book if you want me too! Just tell me what you think and I'll do the same!
Name: The Palace Of A Million Moons
Genre: Historical, Romance, Fantasy
Description: In order to ensure peace in the Realm of the Nine Gods Feng Jiu is forced to marry the man she absolutely hates, the Crown Prince of the realm, Ji An.
But there is a lot more to him than his terrifying and aloof persona and Feng Jiu can't help being inexplicably drawn to him.
With a god killer on the loose and a war brewing the only way for Feng Jiu to survive is to unravel the secrets of the Palace of A Million Moons and make the toughest decision of them all; between love and freedom.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11935610006626005/The-Palace-Of-A-Million-Moons
Review posted:
[5 stars except 4 for stability of updates]
Very good and entertaining read! Exciting; with good developments. Good change-up when the MC was going on easy-mode for awhile! Looking forward to what comes next after the True God realm which it looks like he will achieve very soon!
I'm humbled before a worth top-100 novel! Excellent writing quality; good and light-easy reading; fast-paced with sufficient level-ups and goodies every chapter... No wonder you have achieved easily the 1m views mark that others strive for as if ascending to the heavens!
Some thoughts:
I don't think it can be changed in the already posted chapters - maybe for future arc after the True God cultivation realm?
There's no sense of crisis or plot-driver so far. What about why he or the original host's death? Maybe something to give a sense of urgency to the plot?
Also a strong antagonist? (I'm at chapter 23 only though)
Hokobishu Hi... I'm not really good at reviewing novels but I tell you this.
I like the words you use to describe and other things, and I think it's smooth.
I also like it cause it's about the world war, I felt nostalgic just reading it, I remembered the time I play company heroes.
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nc5599 here's mine as well
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11721807806489805
Synopsis
strong will prey on the weak such is the way of heavens Then I will be so strong such that even the strongest will bow down before thought a young child from now on no one will order me around if they do they die!
if they betray me they die!
if they oppose me they die!
such is the way of heavens
Thanks and I will also review yours
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