DeJeL Thanks, I'll try to reviews yours soon too.

Vgnette No problem, take your time, I'll take a look at yours soon.

        @Froschmo I've put up the review for The Black Out, hopefully it's satisfactory. Will work on "Demon King Is So Adorable" next.

          i'm a fan not an author but shameless enough to do it for him
          Title: The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

          synopsis:Kalan, a big Dragon Ball fan got run over by a Truck and died when he saved a cute little white fox. Luckily for Kalan, he's the MC of our story, thus he reincarnated into the Dragon Ball World!

          Kalan's wish to be reborn as a Saiyan was granted by the Strongest System.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/11551185905431005/The-Strongest-System-in-Dragon-Ball-World

          Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter I love the character's back story and development so far. And the Smooth integration into the original plot.
          it has many rare point that other DBZ novels don't have or didn't even come close to such as
          The unique plot that has never seen or explored stories
          the great character design
          and many more

            Neverender thank you so much!! Sorry I have been busy yesterday, so didnt have a chance to check yours, I will do it tonight

              Ruen
              I reviewed your novel. Feel free to review either of mine. The chapters are long so if you don't like mine just read 5 chapters =p
              Steampunk Apocalypse!
              Uniform System

              Here's a copy of my review (Note: I rated 5/5 despite the scoring in the actual review):
              This novel reminds me of Desolate Era. It's too early to say for sure what it will be like though.
              Writing Quality 4/5: There are some mistakes in each chapter that stand out. Usually misspelled words. Or using 'the' instead of 'they'. It hurts the flow a little, but it's not bad.
              Updates: 5/5? Not sure how long this novel has been around for since I just read it.
              Story Development: 4/5. There's a story... but I had a hard time following the prologue. Too much going on with too many unexplained concepts being introduced. I feel like you need a strong background in having read chinese webnovels to understand it. However, the story quickly improved as it went. Each chapter was clearly better than the previous one.
              Character design: 3/5: I haven't really seen much character design yet. Characters in the prologue are barely described so I can't imagine them, I imagine this will improve once a few chapters past the prologue develop.
              World Background: 4.5/5. I see a lot of potential here. I'd like to see something on the scale of Desolate Era develop.

              Final thoughts for the author: I think the prologue is hurting your story more than helping it. Take that with a grain of salt though. It's a little early to make big judgement calls like that.
              I saw your reply to Fro_Nekota's review. You specified in your reply:
              'The main purpose of the prologue was to give the mc strong opponents by the mass resurrection of powerful souls.'
              My recommendation: Do the mass resurrection without the prologue. Then we get to follow the protagonist journey as he discovers the mystery behind why all these powerful souls resurrected.

                  Endless Mountains
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/11664564305472105/Endless-Mountains
                  what makes it unique: Slightly older mc at around 30 he's not op but starts of significantly strong and he is not a goody two shoes or a twisted piece of human shit he's more like Linley from warlock of the magus world he would do stuff ( evil or good) as long as it benefits him
                  synopsis: The Auguste Clan was one of the three Supreme clans of Yuramia. Extremely well known for their Magical talents and their Ruthlessness. This story will feature around the 3rd Son of the Auguste Clan a man who was known throughout the continent as The Sorcerer King. He wielded such power That the Gods and Devils feared him, however, every story has its beginning and this is the beginning of the Sorcerer King.

                    M_A_Ilmi Added, you are #22 in my queue.
                    (I try to review one novel a day)
                    (Please review my novel as well)

                        @Froschmo I've finished the review on "Demon King Is So Adorable". It was a great read and I hope my review is helpful.

                          existing Of course, and would you kindly give me the links to your novel?

                              existing You are currently #s 11 and 12 in my queue.
                              (I try to review one book a day)
                              (Anyone can tag me any time to find out where they currently are in my queue)

                                I would like to recommend my novel
                                The Frontier
                                Sci-Fi
                                Though it says reading a minimum amount of chapters to review, all I can say the chapters in the beginning are horrid.
                                Reply to this comment if you want me to review a novel I guess.

                                  BeyondBreaking I wish to ask, what of the review categories would they most likely be horrid in? and did you know that you can edit old chapters?
                                  Your novel has been added, #23 in my queue, Please review mine.
                                  (I try to review one novel a day)
                                  (anyone can tag me any time to see where they are in my queue)

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