Katekichi I'm not looking for a swap at the moment, but thank you for the offer nonetheless. I wish you good luck in making your novel !

      JunkieOverThe_Moon jesus yeah I usually just stick to 1.2k to 2k words per chapter that's usually long enough to tell a certain section of the story with out adding a whole bunch of useless stuff, I think even the translated stuff is only about 2k at times so, but usually I just do my amount as I'm busy most of the day with adult stuff, plus it doesn't help that although I have some things written down to help out with my story all of it is just thought up on the spot or I get some inspiration for a certain scene to play out etc

        Katekichi
        Thanks a lot. Let's swap. Plz post the name of ur novel or the link and I will review urs after reading it entirely. As for mine.... Im open for any all constructive criticism. Thanks

            KoFu_ Of course! If you have the time do mine as well currently I'm doing overall quality changes to my chapters in True God since I've been able to switch over the pc instead of mobile but if you do read keep in mind that right now I'm changing chapters 4-8 so that they read a lot smoother and look better over all instead of a huge block of text just saying

                If you have time give it a try and review it. Thanks in advence.

                https://m.webnovel.com/book/12518564305725005

                Synopsis:

                The humanity was welcoming a new age, "Age of Immortality", while Liam Powell was struggling to stay alive as a blind and homeless man. Eventually, he succumbed to the harsh conditions he was living in, he died.

                After his death, Liam is reborn as his 22 year old self, at a point where he could prevent his life going in the same direction as it did in his previous one. This time he is determined to live his life to the fullest with his loved ones.

                There were still few years until the world experienced a great change and entered a new era. With the knowledge of the future, he started treading his own path. There were no predecessor that could light his path or guide him.

                He was the pioneer.

                  If anyone will review my synopsis. I will gladly review there novel in exchange =].

                  After being betrayed by her guild leader, she was forced to stay in the game. She started screaming because she had just lost control of her guild. She pictured going to a bar with her friends, but could not logout.

                  She moved her fingers around the interface, and clicked support, but could not contact a gamemaster. Opening her inventory, she cried. There was no gear. The stakes included all items and gold. She rushed out of the stone chapel and onto the dirt road looking for a person. After bumping into a few NPCs, she noticed there was no players around. Her heartbeat began speeding up, and her fingers where moist.

                  A guard approached Ellen and said: “Why are you naked?” She gazed at the NPC, and said: “I lost my clothes.” The guard replied: ‘You are coming in for public indecency. Consider yourself lucky you will get food and clothes for a few days you bum.”

                  Ellen decided against fighting back and surrendered. She did not want a problem with the local NPC’s. The guard ‘escorted’ her past the market place and into her new prison. He then said: you will be released on October 7th

                  Ellen responded: “what year?” The guard responded 312.

                  Ellen noted that it was two years before the game started. Would she be able to contact another human soon, would she be with woman?

                  Just answering these questions would also be fine.

                  What emotion/emotions will I feel? What Path will the story take? What do you except.

                    Niglover Noticed two small grammatic errors.
                    Her fingers "were" moist.
                    "A" woman.
                    It felt to me that our MC lost everything and is now forced to restart again, but this time there is no one to support her.
                    And I found the last line quite intriguing, though I don't know what that is supposed to mean? XD

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