blondepredator thx
Just don’t be too disappointed in later chapters...
I sound very pessimistic don’t I?
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UnjustlyUnderpaid everyone gets down in the dumps sometimes so thats normal just keep uploading because im kinda hooked at this point not done reading it though
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Im, getting two reviews!!! o yea!
Honestly, I do not really want more reviews. Thank you, for the honor, but it would feel like I am insulting you.
I have direction, on what I need to improve on.
I wrote that novel, and I personally think it is trash, one day I will write something, I can be happy with, I hope you can review that novel!
Zhen_ made a comment once that my plot advances quickly, and my first thought was what plot?
Forsaken1 I review for two reasons, to see if I wanna continue reading the novel, and to help the author...... If you don't plan to finish one or both your novels, then please reply to me which one(s) you plan to drop since you already said you don't need the ladder reason... but I still have the former reason else-wise, so I'll still review them.;,;.
I'mma hop on this bandwagon! I'd love anyone interested in fantasy/sci-fi mashup novels to check out my newest work. There are only 3 chapters currently, but they're pretty hefty. Give it a looksie and see what you think!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12317106905252805/Clockwork-Revenant
Since i really don't want anyone to read my book as its just a way i use to vent when i hit a slump (Really it will scar you for life don't even try) plus its really graphic and only gets worse the more i write read this little excerpt please and comment on it so that i can at least get some feedback on the mood or what i can add to it
The surly faced lad glared at all that was before him, damning it to hell.
The stench of rotting flesh, roasted meat and unwashed men was all known and very much unwelcome by his nostrils, as well as the angry banter that filled every crevice in that cursed dungeon.
"That him?" he heard one say.
"Aye, torched a whole platoon to dust,"
"He don't look like much..." another grumbled, glancing up at the cage he was held in.
"Where's his scales and wings? Boy looks nothing like a beast!" he went on, the lad spared him no glance looking straight ahead, never flinching, never moving, ever stoic like a marble statue but he still heard all the same,
"they tucked away good thing too, that cage wouldn't fit him otherwise."
"Why?"
"Enchanted bars-if he tries to break through them he'll be in a world of agony,"
the lad growled the searing brands on his arms itching at the memory,
the stupid cage burned him when he tried to shift,
"pity he's a pretty one... tall gruff looks like he can take it hard and give it hard wouldn't mind it either way..." he heard them clear as day resisting the urge to wretch.
he did not move he would not move not for anything nor for everything he wouldn't dare seem weak choosing instead to focus on another part of the cesspool that was this dungeon,
"Kinda tragic really," the voices were distant now but he held on straining just a lick further, "i hear his sister sold him out."
"its always family..." the third one sighed almost feeling sorry for the caged lad, he sighed shutting his eyes in agreement.
It was always family.
okay what did you think? i cant quite get that old victorian english vibe i'm going for in this story so just respond here on what can be added
Uhmmm.... https://m.webnovel.com/book/10384493105022805
Thank god! I recently updated it and it has just reached 5 chaps! Yes!
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lazyredragon You're good. I can sense some Steven Erikson / Brandon Sanderson / Patrick Rothfuss in your writing somewhere. Pay closer attention to the details when you're reading properly edited books. For now, all I can really tell you is to study the basics (like proper use of punctuations), because when you don't have to worry about your writing foundations, you can focus on the bigger lessons. <-- this is a lesson I'm currently learning from It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future, seriously, I think it's the best advice out there, for anyone.
(Review as in the stars review? or like review as in a critique? lmaoo I'm new to this)
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I started something new, after thinking about it!
If you want to review =]
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12334098105285205/Assassins-Rebellion
It should have some content, by the time you get to it.
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Forsaken1
I’m so proud, my little [unknown gender] is growing up and decided to write his next (real) novel tear drips down my face