Delliiriium I don’t mind, do your own pace haha, haven’t been uploading either

      I'm needing a review and constructive criticism on my writing and what I can improve on since I do wanna get better. In return just let me know what story you want me to do a review on and I will! The name of the story is True God, It so far has 9 chapters I believe. I'm mainly just using it to improve my overall writing before I do some big boy stuff here is the synopsis

      Experiencing the life of mortals by creating my own and learning from them. Will I be a graceful and forgiving god? Or will I rule my creations with an iron fist!

      Join and see the grand adventures I will partake in the world's of my own creation!

        StarsGrace
        Hello, I would like swap review with u. Here are the detail of my novel.
        Name- Vengeance, war and honor.
        Url- https://m.webnovel.com/book/12118500106950205
        (If u can, plz check the new chapters than the first ones cos they need to be reworked.
        Tell me whether or not I should add something. )

        I have a second novel which is also in its infant stage.
        Name- Paradise de Fou.
        Check it if u have time.
        And im gonna check urs so, plz check mine.
        Constructive criticism is appreciated.

            JunkieOverThe_Moon I checked the first one out and I'm just letting you know the things you should add and or not add and after this I'll leave the review on it I was going to start from 24 but jesus it's long lol (not a complaint but just saying) so I did it from the newer ones honestly from 24(which I actually read the whole thing) to the two newest ones it sort of felt as though the descriptive language was a little toned down over all but I feel that the two new chapters were quite solid and well written, I'll have to go back and check if there's any mistakes or anything. So far it's all good! There was good story progression and it didn't feel as if you were just throwing words out in order to extend the length of the two chapters.

                StarsGrace

                Thanks a lot frnd!!!
                I know about those chapters. I was experimenting on them and they got our worse than I expected....
                Did u know that the book of authors tells new authors to write chapters of 3-5k words. I was just testing that and.... This happened. I posted some new chapters, SP check them out and tell me the mistakes.
                Thanks a lot 🙏 🙏 🙏

                    Katekichi I'm not looking for a swap at the moment, but thank you for the offer nonetheless. I wish you good luck in making your novel !

                        JunkieOverThe_Moon jesus yeah I usually just stick to 1.2k to 2k words per chapter that's usually long enough to tell a certain section of the story with out adding a whole bunch of useless stuff, I think even the translated stuff is only about 2k at times so, but usually I just do my amount as I'm busy most of the day with adult stuff, plus it doesn't help that although I have some things written down to help out with my story all of it is just thought up on the spot or I get some inspiration for a certain scene to play out etc

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