Froschmo I'll read black out yow hahaha. I would love if the review is posted on the review panel in the novel. Thanks!! ♥️

      existing thanks! Same with me, please write it on review panel, I will check yours later tonight

        Froschmo I also left a review on your the black out. Couldn't find much to complain about. Grammar and story wise, you did a good job in all honesty. I want to thank you for spending some time in reviewing my work. Really helpful for me!

            existing finished the review of one. I hope you keep working on it. White Queen Ascending has so much potential to being part of the top read but your grammar 😭😭😭😭

                Froschmo I want to read but I'm not into BL but it's so interesting I am so conflicted!!! BUT just a tip add a tag to your novels so people can find them. There are lots that love BL and there are days I feel up to it just not today but when I do I promise to write a review.

                    Scarlettbunny tags already added, but I heard other people could not see them, until at least five needed to add same tags as me. Could you at least add tags on my novel?
                    Too bad, you dont read BL huhu, the black out is only 5 chap now, if you are interested, you can read them. But I will no force you if it is not your cup of tea

                        Scarlettbunny I just woke up. Haha I've seen your review! Thank you very much! I'm going to review yours later. My eyes are still closing..
                        DeJeL thank you!! Such a piled up work haha keep going! I'll review yours soon too.

                              Froschmo I caved I really liked the first chapter in Black Out why novel why?!?! I love to read... I'll just add it to my library and when I need a dose of BL I'll read it 😀

                                  Scarlettbunny I'll put this here for now.

                                  This review is made based on my first impression only as I'm still on chapter 7.

                                  Honestly I'm not a fan of the classic fairytales where the female MC needs to be saved by the prince charming or something. Idk if this is like that. but somehow, your novel felt me really intrigued. It got me hooked up and anticipate what would happen in the future.

                                  5/5 The story is cool, original in its own way. Hinderella/Cinderella. With evil step mother and sisters in the future. I'm expecting it to become popular soon.

                                  4/5 Characters.. is MC going to be bullied without much fight? Her father is overprotective, how could she be bullied? Well unless he dies? Or is he going to be super in love with the stepmother making him neglect his favourite daughter?
                                  The lady Masama.. (funny, "Masama" in Tagalog means "bad") her daughter was accidentally shoved with a cake and she already want to ruin the entire girls life? Is she just really too bad and unreasonable? Well atleast her character is really perfect for an antagonist. Just by reading a small part of her pov I already started hating her.
                                  The bff's are good. I decided that I love Blaire the most in this story.

                                  (Above questions.. were the ones that popped up inside my head while reading and comparing it to the old Cinderella story.)

                                  4.5/5 Flow. The spelling and grammar are excellent. I had to reread some sentences again to understand what's going on. Maybe because the paragraphs are a bit long, kinda hurts my eyes that have bad astigmatism. haha but i really like how everything is so descriptive, I was able to imagine the scenes clearly in my head.

                                  Added it in my library, and I'll continue reading. I'll support it. Goodluck!! And keep up the good work!!

                                      existing aww thanks and nope grammar isn't the best actually. I'm told often how bad it is so that's why I passed along the tip I was taught. Masama means wicked so yup, everyone's names all mean something, Blair's last name means Thorn, there's other's too athlete, glasses, warrior, etc.

                                          This thread looks fun. I'm willing to swap reviews with anyone for either of my two novels.
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                                          Note: My reviews of your book will be completely honest, but will still give five stars. I'll try to point out what's good and what can be improved. I'll read anything, but I am biased towards systems, fantasy, SwordAndMagic, mecha, eastern, etc.

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