https://www.webnovel.com/book/11501518405408905/System-Programmer
Always looking for new opinions. :D
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11501518405408905/System-Programmer
Always looking for new opinions. :D
Hello
I would love to review your novels. If anyone wants then just ask and I'll read your novel and review it as soon as possible.
However novel must not be more than 100 chapters.
And warning: My review will be honest one. So don't expect straight 5 star unless novels blows my mind.
Anyhow for my novel Ruthless-Losing My Innocence To World
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12001029805736305/Ruthless-Losing-my-innocence-to-world
Synopsis
Face flawless as a model, looks delicate as feathers, eyes innocent as child- Arsenio Ishiko, the Almighty Big Boss, the fathomable leader of the nationwide mafia group, finds a girl that catches his interest at the first sight.
But wait...
She is not exactly what she looks like.
Huh?
How did the man that offended her ended up dead with his whole family?
How did the girl who picked up on her is now crippled and broke?
But wait again...
Their royal and regal Almighty Big Boss who NEVER EVER spares a glance to fairer sex is suddenly interested in talking to that little fox?
And he, who treats women like viruses, just patted that little fox head to encourage her?
Something is fishy.
"Who exactly is she? Is Angelize even her real name?"
Genera.
Action
Romance
Eastern Fantasy
Adventures
Tags.
Female Protagonist
Weak to Strong
Strong Female Lead
Face Slapping
Merciless Female lead
FL with computer skills
Computer hacking
Possessive male lead
Hot ML and FL
Powerful FL
Cold Goddess FL
Reverse Harem
I couldn't have a constructive criticism till now. The reviews that exists don't tell me much.
So yeah I'm that is an idiot who is in search of some criticism
Because Criticisms makes us better. So if you are free then I would appreciate it.
Since you're kindly offering, do you mind looking at mine? :D
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11501518405408905/System-Programmer
You might be at the point that you need a professional.
UnjustlyUnderpaid Nooo, lol, don't ask me not to read the end, that's the worst kind of cliffhanger. Even if you're unhappy about ending it more abruptly than you wanted to, it'll still be good to see the ending you give it. As far as the stones, if you're going to go out, might as well be with a bang? Your ranking is awesome this week.
Just coming here and introducing the new novel that I decided to make.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12572607405957005/Reincarnated-as-a-Sword-Scabbard%3F!
I decided to write it under the Writing Prompt #41 for swords
I'm not sure if this follows the prompt but I Just wanted to try. Thanks!
My novel only has one chapter for now with 1,500 words.
I don't necessarily need a good review, just something simple. I know if I try to write a review its not going to be om any grammar mistakes that's for sure.
Oh and I tried making a good synopsis but I'm sticking with this, for now, it's the best I can do.
Don't try to take this novel seriously. Well, you can if you want.
Edit: I published a 3rd chapter
UnjustlyUnderpaid At least, I hope you weren't saying my novel also sounds like an unfinished outline.
Author_Shizu I would love to review swap.
gusdefrog no! I’m just saying that it is shocking how such a great novel as yours have so little reviews! We need to find a way to get it more out there.
Happy New Years everybody! Cheers! To a new year of writing and reading, I wish you the best of luck and never give up hope even when everything seems bleak.
You busy?
UnjustlyUnderpaid
Can you help me with something?
If anyone is willing to review, my one Chapter novel/Synopsis.
I would be very thankful.
Do not leave reviews on the novel page please =]
Some of you may have seen the Synopsis, I had issues with my other account and decided to make a new one =]
Acutelittletrap what do you need?
UnjustlyUnderpaid
Love, or your input on the novel above.
Please do not leave, a review on the page I want to leave it clean, until I get better.
and if it torn apart by bad reviews, it may prevent new readers from seeing it after I improve =]
Acutelittletrap isn’t the summary the exact same one that niglover posted above?
Also, I’ll see what I can do, my review will either be here or in the comments.