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    Title: Apex System
    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10690615405128905/Apex-System
    Synopsis:
    Hailed as a once-in-a-millennium genius, he was deceived and betrayed.

    He lost everything, including his life.

    However, Legends never die!

    Armed with a system, reaching the apex is but a matter of time.

    Follow the story of a legend as he carves an everlasting glory!


    Just gimme a holler if you're up for some review swapping. ;)

      I'm joining the shameless club too! I'm fairly new to this so I'm unsure of how to go about this: My book has only 3 chapters till now but constructive criticism would really help me developing it!

      I might be a little delayed but I'm up for the review swap and I'll totally read your book if you want me too! Just tell me what you think and I'll do the same!

      Name: The Palace Of A Million Moons

      Genre: Historical, Romance, Fantasy

      Description: In order to ensure peace in the Realm of the Nine Gods Feng Jiu is forced to marry the man she absolutely hates, the Crown Prince of the realm, Ji An.

      But there is a lot more to him than his terrifying and aloof persona and Feng Jiu can't help being inexplicably drawn to him.

      With a god killer on the loose and a war brewing the only way for Feng Jiu to survive is to unravel the secrets of the Palace of A Million Moons and make the toughest decision of them all; between love and freedom.

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11935610006626005/The-Palace-Of-A-Million-Moons

        NeverLost

        Review posted:
        [5 stars except 4 for stability of updates]
        Very good and entertaining read! Exciting; with good developments. Good change-up when the MC was going on easy-mode for awhile! Looking forward to what comes next after the True God realm which it looks like he will achieve very soon!

        I'm humbled before a worth top-100 novel! Excellent writing quality; good and light-easy reading; fast-paced with sufficient level-ups and goodies every chapter... No wonder you have achieved easily the 1m views mark that others strive for as if ascending to the heavens!

        Some thoughts:
        I don't think it can be changed in the already posted chapters - maybe for future arc after the True God cultivation realm?

        There's no sense of crisis or plot-driver so far. What about why he or the original host's death? Maybe something to give a sense of urgency to the plot?

        Also a strong antagonist? (I'm at chapter 23 only though)

        My novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11594239806435805

          Hokobishu Hi... I'm not really good at reviewing novels but I tell you this.

          I like the words you use to describe and other things, and I think it's smooth.

          I also like it cause it's about the world war, I felt nostalgic just reading it, I remembered the time I play company heroes.

            NeverLost

            nc5599 here's mine as well
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/11721807806489805
            Synopsis
            strong will prey on the weak such is the way of heavens Then I will be so strong such that even the strongest will bow down before thought a young child from now on no one will order me around if they do they die!
            if they betray me they die!
            if they oppose me they die!
            such is the way of heavens


            Thanks and I will also review yours

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              Tag me any time to find out where you are on my queue.;,;.

              daoist_om two ways, click reply to a post of mine, or @ before my username.;,;.
              IE @MasterRabbink tags my good old webnovel friend MasterRabbink.;,;. And I already tagged you at the beginning of the msg.;,;.

                DeJeL replying to you means tagging right, so this can be considered as tagging?

                  daoist_om yup.;,;.
                  but since I added you around 08:30 (24 hr) in the time zone I'm in, and I don't do any reviews until 16:00, so your novel has retained its position as of yet.;,;.

                  Hello, my is hellen and i go by the name kim Sai. I am new writer here at Web novel and i would like to share my novel. I would be very happy and grateful if you can read my novel and give your kind reviews😊
                  Link to my novel LOVE AND BETRAYAL
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/11899449805602705
                  I will review your's too:)

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