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https://www.webnovel.com/book/12281638206204005/The-Low-Key-System

I'm looking for a full novel review - 27 short chapters 500-1200 words each, its about 5 days old, and is a completed novel.
I have had other people, review my work before, but now that the novel is completed, I would like full review. if possible.

In-exchange, I can promise a full review as well, I'm a pretty honest person, I noticed some people here sorta sugar coat things, because I am trying to improve as a writer not make friends, and if you would like to improve with me, I would hope you can accept my offer.

      Forsaken1 a full review? I'm on it. But for me to properly review a completed book will take time since I tend to take notice how a writer writes or tries to expand the book. It is okay with you? You can review mine after I've done with yours

          Forsaken1 alright :) for the book I'm currently writing it was my first time writing it in English. I wanted to translate my sci fi thriller but it'd take more efforts so I just settle with a lighter book first. I'll review your The Low Key System in the coming weekend

            Forsaken1 around 600 right now.

            Also I just got discord and heard an interesting thing about a discord sect. At a certain level you can make one and just talk with pals, we should totally make one one day... or not

                Forsaken1
                Honestly considering that was the first novel you ever posted it was pretty good. I have no doubt you’ve gained more experience from writing it and if you plan on writing another novel, I’ll look forward to it.

                Now that I got the courtesies out of the way, I now need to say this.

                -Character development
                -Details to story
                -linear plot
                -fixes grammar, especially with commas and the like
                -no Stone unturned
                -and world background

                This is my final advice for this novel and possible advice for future ones. It is up to you whether you understand it or not. I made it so open because I understand that out writing styles are different, so I want to see where you will go with this. And if you don’t plan on making a new novel, that’s okay ok. I will support your decision all the way👍😊

                    Forsaken1

                    In fact your ending inspired me to do something g once my current novel ends. Which between you, me, and everyone reading this, my current novel is still more of a practice one for me to learn the rules and see where I can go wrong in some parts. I’ve learned so much from it, whether it is my own revelation or someone else’s

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