MishaK

That you reached the bottom, now you can only climb up.

Why don't you try this exercise?

I tell you:
Paritosh is old

Now you show me an old Paritosh.

      ValentinaKhan hahaha
      Will definitely send you my new upcoming novel for review before it hits the portal! Hope you have a discord acc.

          ValentinaKhan

          Thanks so much for the critique! I do tend to get a bit caught up in exposition as I'm writing, but I hope to introduce more action as the story progresses (I dread thinking about how long it'll take me to write fight scenes haha)

            Jamison_C

            Thanks so much for your review! I really liked your work, though it's a genre I haven't read much of. Overall, the thing that stood out to me most was mainly that it seemed more like a script than a novel, due to how dialogue-heavy the first few chapters were.

              A walk through the eternity
              My story please review it and be a little bit mild on the reviews
              It's about a evil scientist's journey to immortality
              Synopsis: A world with endless possibilities and a search for eternity.
              A world where strength is worshipped and might is always right, where laws are meant to be broken but only by the strong.
              Its inhabitants tread on the path to eternity

              it’s not a story of a hero nor of an antihero, its a story of a villain among villain. This is a guide book to all villains not a happy story.

                ValentinaKhan LoL this makes me want to ask what you can figure out about my main character's physique, but it would take many chapters since she spends a lot more time in game than out. I haven't reached the point where I introduce another person's view of her yet though. :)

                    Let's swap reviews!! Would love to hear what you think about my novel, and what I should fix in it! ♥

                    (do tell me here if you left a review though ~)

                    Title: Gray Hour: The Cursed Coin
                    Genre/s: Fantasy, thriller, and romance
                    Link:
                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12546071305848005/Gray-Hour%3A-The-Cursed-Coin
                    Synopsis:
                    "Would you be able to fall in love with your murderer?"
                    Diana wakes up and finds that instead of only five minutes to live, she has now twenty-four hours. She needs to find the reason and ‘cure’ for her endless cycle of deaths. But, when there are infinite numbers of possibilities, suspects, and a boyfriend – or should she say a fiancé? – who is the reason for her deaths ninety-percent of the times, it becomes complicated.

                      I'd like to join the fray.

                      Formal link https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/33963836436433981

                      Short-short synopsis: If you were transported from this world to another almost identical. If you were transported from your life to your teenage self. If you had to restart your life again. Would you, or would you cling to your memories?

                      Genre: Romance, Sci-fi; in that order.

                      I wouldn't read i here due to the lack of formatting features (ie italic and/or bolded text can't be displayed), but it's easily found by searching elsewhere.

                      I'm uploding a back-log so daily new chapters here should be available for the coming year or so (currently over 370k words written).

                      I will respond to reviews with an honest review of my own. I have yet to fail to do so since I started doing tit for tats around 2015.

                        Hi! I'm currently in a contest and I 'm totally in need of people feedback about my story so far. Will review your story in exchange.

                        Title : Our Perfectly Imperfect Relationship

                        Synopsis : "You.. Marry me and I'll make it that you will live a life without worries.."
                        Lee Ha Eun was bewildered by the words said from the unknown man in front of her and yet why does she feel like she could trust him?
                        With nowhere else to go and her newly born baby with her, she couldn't be picky and decided to follow this man.
                        But who would have thought she would become the wife to the CEO of the most renowned and powerful business company in the whole of South Korea, Kim Corporation's Kim Min Joon.
                        Why has this powerful man chose her to marry? What was he trying to do? Was it just by a mere chance of luck that brought this two together or were they destined to be by each other side? Who knows but one can be sure that everything has it's reasons..
                        "Why is my heart beating like this for him? Have I possibly fallen in love with him?"

                        Your reviews will really mean alot to me since this is my first time writing a novel and it can help to tell me where I stand on my writing. Thanks alot!

                          Kingoftheland

                          Author: DevilsMocktail
                          Title: Legend of the Wyrm Bearer
                          Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/11982165806696705
                          Genre: fantasy, cultivation
                          Synopsis: A lot of time passed since the apocalypse hit the Earth since then the plane kept on expanding, strange energy permitted the air and changed the very core of earthlings, granting them the ability to use magic and cultivate.

                          Paul Drakonen was born genius of the Snake branch clan, but during the dangerous awakening ritual, everything went south for him. From the rising star of the kingdom, he became a cripple. But will he succumb to the cruel fate, or pave his own path?

                              Kingoftheland

                              Author: DevilsMocktail
                              Title: Legend of the Wyrm Bearer
                              Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/11982165806696705
                              Genre: fantasy, cultivation
                              Synopsis: A lot of time passed since the apocalypse hit the Earth since then the plane kept on expanding, strange energy permitted the air and changed the very core of earthlings, granting them the ability to use magic and cultivate.

                              Paul Drakonen was born genius of the Snake branch clan, but during the dangerous awakening ritual, everything went south for him. From the rising star of the kingdom, he became a cripple. But will he succumb to the cruel fate, or pave his own path?

                                  DevilsMocktail
                                  You seem to be new here.

                                  1) Pick some novels you're interested in reading/ reviewing.
                                  2) Reply to those authors, propose a swap.
                                  3) If they agree, then you review their novels then wait for them to review yours.

                                      MishaK Sure~! Send me the link to your story~! But first, is it okay if I read all the chapters (assuming it's not 20+ chapters) first before I give a review?

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