Kingoftheland

Author: DevilsMocktail
Title: Legend of the Wyrm Bearer
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/11982165806696705
Genre: fantasy, cultivation
Synopsis: A lot of time passed since the apocalypse hit the Earth since then the plane kept on expanding, strange energy permitted the air and changed the very core of earthlings, granting them the ability to use magic and cultivate.

Paul Drakonen was born genius of the Snake branch clan, but during the dangerous awakening ritual, everything went south for him. From the rising star of the kingdom, he became a cripple. But will he succumb to the cruel fate, or pave his own path?

      DevilsMocktail
      You seem to be new here.

      1) Pick some novels you're interested in reading/ reviewing.
      2) Reply to those authors, propose a swap.
      3) If they agree, then you review their novels then wait for them to review yours.

          MishaK Sure~! Send me the link to your story~! But first, is it okay if I read all the chapters (assuming it's not 20+ chapters) first before I give a review?

              MishaK The phenomenal author evolution writing contest. Since I'm new to writing, I thought the contest can help me improve my writing skills. Just leave me the link to your story and I'll leave you a review after I'm done reading it. Thank you for helping!

                  luoshenhua Thank you! I really appreciate it

                  I also left a review. I really love your story and how it is going. Keep the good work!

                      MishaK Great! But since there are 30 chapters, I'll leave a review by the time I get to chapter 20 or a reasonable reading status. Is that okay?

                          Yeonsoo09 I left my review on your story! But what I really wanted to know was if there was a way to discuss with you in private? I don't believe that I should point out any errors or corrections or whatever underneath the chapters where everyone else can see. I'd prefer to advice you secretly, without readers knowing if you're lacking in anything.

                          So just let me know...

                              Nitharsh I reviewed your first chapter. I could see this beautiful blue ocean and underneath it this whole other world that takes your breath away. I really liked how you were able to paint a picture of the grandeur and beauty of an underworld Kingdom. With more practice, work, and grammar fixes I feel that you could really turn this into something great. Hope this helps! If you have time to kill. I would definitely appreciate your opinion as well on my novel. Here is the link. https://www.webnovel.com/book/12532430605786005

                                  [unknown] Sometimes it even works :). Always worth a try.

                                    IvoryDragon Checked out your book. It has a nice beginning.
                                    If you have time, do read mine too.
                                    Title: The Archaic Elements
                                    Synopsis:

                                    Avis realm- a space sealed in time.

                                    Here, Cultivators shatter the Shackles which bind their Mortal Soul from reaching the Divine.

                                    Ten shackles to Divinity remains the destination …..Yet no one has ever succeeded in a Millennia.

                                    In this world dominated by strength drifts a kid who has no idea of where his journey leads.

                                    Neither is he aware of the truth regarding his ORIGIN.
                                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12118348406949905/The-Archaic-Elements

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