The bearded old man snickers at her as he slams the door shut. There was neither mercy nor sympathy given
no mercy given and no sympathy towards the woman with a baby in her arms.
She was just trying to seek shelter from the rain and yet almost every
place where she went, she was either kicked out by them or rejected harshly like before.
continues continued to walk around and in hopes of finding find a decent shelter to take cover (This is not necessary), she found an abandoned spoilt (?) telephone booth right beside the convenience store.
It was small and dirty, and even the numerous shattered glass on the floor didn't matter to her.
lots of broken glass all around but that doesn't concern her in the least. What mattered was that she finally found a spot with a roof on top of her head and it's free. Just enough for her and her baby for now.
She started to clear the broken glasses around her for a spot to sit, cutting her fingers
as she cut her fingers a few times in the process. But she doesn't didn't wince or make a sound. She just (not needed) endured the pain and continued cleaning until it was comfortable enough for her.
"Baby.. I'm sorry you have to go through all this because of me.. I'm a failure as your mother and nothing will ever change that.. If I didn't give birth to you, you wouldn't have to suffer this much with me.. I'm sorry.. Please forgive this horrible and worthless mother of yours.." Why do you have so much periods here? If you wish to indicate that a character trailed off from what they were saying, I suggest you break their speech like so, "Baby, I'm sorry you have to go through all this because of me..." Ha Eun whispered in her baby's ear softly as her eyes welled with tears