blue_cloud I'll be checking out yours, but I'll be honest, I hope to see that you've already applied some of the pointers others gave you days ago :)

WinterBud Here is mine. Give a me a bit and ill read yours too.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12006209906741405/Survival-to-Godhood

UnjustlyUnderpaid Just because the rules say I only need to read 5 doesn't mean I only read 5. I like to read more of the authors to really give them good feed back. You don't have to read more than 5, just kinda want your opinion on things.

    Forsaken1 oaky, read through a few of your comments. I have left some of my suggestion that you can either do or not. Aftera I’m not the best author in the world and the help I can give is minimal, after a few more chapters update then I will give you a real review and also check up on your improvements

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