Forsaken1 oaky, read through a few of your comments. I have left some of my suggestion that you can either do or not. Aftera I’m not the best author in the world and the help I can give is minimal, after a few more chapters update then I will give you a real review and also check up on your improvements

DragonKnight531 sounds rough. If you’re too busy you should say that you will be going on a small hiatus. This not only gives you a chance to finish your non-writer tasks, but this buys you some time to make backup chapters.

Trust me, back up chapters are high up the list of Things A Webnovel Author Always Needs.

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