UnjustlyUnderpaid

I will edit/overhaul it with your comments in mind.

After reading it your right there is a lot going on

MC cheated out of her guild, given no explanation for why she is trapped in the game, and tossed into the past.

Maybe I should remake and edit that content using it for C1... hmm

Thanks again <3

      Niglover no need to review my novel (mostly because I’m shy about it) just concentrate on your own novel and help others on this post. 👍😁 my novel is about to have a pretty bad (bad as in it sucks, not bad as in it’s a tragedy) ending and I don’t want anymore star reviews on it to trick people into reading my novel, simply due to the fact that I know it’s not my best work. I appreciate the offer, but I don’t want you to suffer through that.

        gusdefrog same for you, due to how I’m about to rush the ending of my novel like its a speeding train, I suggest that you might want to stop reading it and voting for it. If just to not ruin your impression of a book that started out pretty decently and ended up terribly. I would like to thank you for all of the help you’ve given me in the past and I hope you continue writing your novel with great success(which I am sure you’ll get)

            Niglover

            Hey, thanks!
            I know, it does sound preachy. I might change it, soon to something more catchy.
            By the way, what do you mean by the last line?

                Katekichi

                I quickly changed it to this.

                Ellen noted it was two years before the game started. Would she be able to contact another ‘human’ soon, could she find a lover?

                    Hello
                    I would love to review your novels. If anyone wants then just ask and I'll read your novel and review it as soon as possible.
                    However novel must not be more than 100 chapters.
                    And warning: My review will be honest one. So don't expect straight 5 star unless novels blows my mind.

                    Anyhow for my novel Ruthless-Losing My Innocence To World

                    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12001029805736305/Ruthless-Losing-my-innocence-to-world

                    Synopsis
                    Face flawless as a model, looks delicate as feathers, eyes innocent as child- Arsenio Ishiko, the Almighty Big Boss, the fathomable leader of the nationwide mafia group, finds a girl that catches his interest at the first sight.

                    But wait...

                    She is not exactly what she looks like.

                    Huh?

                    How did the man that offended her ended up dead with his whole family?

                    How did the girl who picked up on her is now crippled and broke?

                    But wait again...

                    Their royal and regal Almighty Big Boss who NEVER EVER spares a glance to fairer sex is suddenly interested in talking to that little fox?

                    And he, who treats women like viruses, just patted that little fox head to encourage her?

                    Something is fishy.

                    "Who exactly is she? Is Angelize even her real name?"

                    Genera.

                    Action
                    Romance
                    Eastern Fantasy
                    Adventures

                    Tags.

                    Female Protagonist
                    Weak to Strong
                    Strong Female Lead
                    Face Slapping
                    Merciless Female lead
                    FL with computer skills
                    Computer hacking
                    Possessive male lead
                    Hot ML and FL
                    Powerful FL
                    Cold Goddess FL
                    Reverse Harem

                    I couldn't have a constructive criticism till now. The reviews that exists don't tell me much.

                    So yeah I'm that is an idiot who is in search of some criticism😣

                    Because Criticisms makes us better. So if you are free then I would appreciate it.

                      UnjustlyUnderpaid Nooo, lol, don't ask me not to read the end, that's the worst kind of cliffhanger. Even if you're unhappy about ending it more abruptly than you wanted to, it'll still be good to see the ending you give it. As far as the stones, if you're going to go out, might as well be with a bang? Your ranking is awesome this week.

                          Just coming here and introducing the new novel that I decided to make.

                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/12572607405957005/Reincarnated-as-a-Sword-Scabbard%3F!
                          I decided to write it under the Writing Prompt #41 for swords
                          I'm not sure if this follows the prompt but I Just wanted to try. Thanks!
                          My novel only has one chapter for now with 1,500 words.

                          I don't necessarily need a good review, just something simple. I know if I try to write a review its not going to be om any grammar mistakes that's for sure.
                          Oh and I tried making a good synopsis but I'm sticking with this, for now, it's the best I can do.

                          Don't try to take this novel seriously. Well, you can if you want.

                          Edit: I published a 3rd chapter

                            champakes I don't mind reading it if you read mines. I have 4 chapters and 10,000 words

                                gusdefrog no! I’m just saying that it is shocking how such a great novel as yours have so little reviews! We need to find a way to get it more out there.

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