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SimmeringHours I just realized today when I loaded the app, that you're using a screenshot from Journey as your cover... kinda tacky? If it's just because you have trouble finding something free to use, I hereby grant you permission to use any of the artwork on techpixie.net.

Hyowha This is amazingly detailed o.o

gusdefrog
Thanks gusdefrog! I'll take a look at techpixie.net right now

Hyowha

Hey I made a ton of changes, I would love if you took a glace and commented on the direction I went with them.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12591697006035505/Surviving-in-the-Game

LexieM3 You liar!
I reviewed yours!
You didn't review mine!

Kingoftheland

Author_Shizu

Acutelittletrap

gusdefrog

UnjustlyUnderpaid

MC_Dakki

Hyowha

Apophis9

fantasy_land

hello everyone! also who i didn't tag, hello!

please help me review my work. i will do the same for you. if you gonna review than like or comment on this, so i will know about you and i will check your work.

i need:
--Constructive Criticism: this is where you tell that what i should fix and how to fix it. If you don't know how i can fix it then make sure that such is clear.
--Positive Feedback: this is where you tell me what i did right, make sure to add at least one thing.
--Personal Feedback: this is where you tell me your personal opinions of the book and whether you will continue reading the book or not

i will do the same as above for you.

thank you!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/12286043505200605/System%3AHarry-The-Harem-lord

great_gamer Done mate.

Your turn ;)
https://m.webnovel.com/book/11966134905672605

David_Tieku done, a very interesting novel even gave your chapters some rating stars, looking forward to your novel developing and also returning the favour by a review.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/11966134905672605

Thank you in advance ;]

great_gamer
Done! I have to admit it's a good novel.. different from ones I have read. Here's the link to my novel

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12186924305054405

Author_Shizu
Just provide me the link for your novel

fantasy_land Oh by the way I liked your novel.
Hadn't finished reading. Will review it once finished reading.

Author_Shizu
Thanks.. I know I didn't wrong you but still it's swapping isn't it? So I don't mind reviewing yours

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/11982165806696705

Guys, I need feedback!

DevilsMocktail

I glaceed at the synopsis, and it looked like a textbook, so I simply ran away.

Also just say Trump/ Putin, names are public domain.

great_gamer
Hey god_of_pleasure. I left a review about positive feedback and personal feedback on your book page.
I'll write the constructive criticism here:
first sentence of your synopsis is a run-on sentence. Incorrect in terms of grammar. Not sure if you did it on purpose for other reasons. I think breaking it with period should be fine?
Also, try to keep the tenses the same?
"Her voice didn't escape Harry's ear, so he got into the business with newfound energy from a listening voice that could melt anyone's heart just by hearing.
Suddenly he remembers a system and a cheeked potion which can help him, though due to the unstable soul he can't use magic, it wouldn't stop from using a potion."
You got past and present all mixed up.
Overall, the book is great! The basic setting is very interesting.
Please give me a review when you have time.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

Author_Shizu oh my, a theft has occured right before my very eyes

Dr_Zombie No worries man! If its not too much trouble, could you copy and paste the review onto this version of the novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12590226105022105

I've re-posted it so that i could join the latest authors competition :D