KoFu_ I reviewed your story. It's not some kind of blackmail. Story aroused my interest and I hope you will continue writing it. As for reviewing my story do as you wish.

    fantasy_land Done. Romance fiction isn't my kind of thing but I read some chaps. Only one thing that I couldn't bear with was the length of chapters. 1 chapters = 350/400 words. I prefer reading one long chap than million short haha.

        ArcaneDragon
        Indeed the first few chapters are short. But later on I have tried to increase the length. Thanks for the review.

            Anyone that wants is free to read and review my novel. I'll check daily for new reviews and review your novels afterwards. There are 3 chapters out, so it's a short read so far, but please feel free to give it an honest review, instead of just maxing out stars :)

            Novel - Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith

            Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith

            Synopsis:

            Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.

            His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.

            In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.

            A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.

              MishaK
              Hi MishaK!
              I left you a review. Here is some other feedback:
              First of all, can you change the chapter title?
              Chapter 1: Chapter 1 is a little weird.
              Also, can you explain the social setting more? Because arranged marriage is a pretty old tradition in most part of the world now.
              The writing quality is great! I see a bright future for your work. Hope this helps!
              Here is a link to my work: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12519833905731105

                  ArcaneDragon
                  Hi ArcaneDragon!
                  I did a review for you.
                  I think maybe review / study grammar rules and break long paragraphs apart? (i.e. last paragraph of ch3)
                  Also render the transition between scene to scene? Like what happened between MC's mother's death and MC becoming a beggar?
                  The basic setting is flawless. Development is also good. Hope this helps! Keep up the good work!

                      Happy New Year!

                      I joined roughly two weeks ago and I just found out about this thread. I'm not confident about my writing so I'd be grateful for constructive input. Certainly, I'd return the favor (though it might not be that helpful...). So far, there're three chapters out. It's typical (?) modern romance story.

                      Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You

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                      Synopsis

                      Verlene is a lurker in an online community for artists. She loves to stalk popular artists for inspiration and drowns herself in a loop of depressing songs when desperate for melancholy sparks. Occasionally, she browses NKD for new songs and live streams.

                      A small preview of black screen with bolded words in white read: FIRST STREAM caught her attention. The amount of viewers did not even reach 30 when she entered the room.

                      A certain streamer: "Thank you all for coming! I'm actually quite nervous about this…"

                      Verlene (ID: Kiku): This voice is so misleading… Let's ask in the comment box! "Uh… boy or girl?!"

                      A certain streamer: "How rude, Kiku-san! I am a MAN!"

                      Verlene (ID: Kiku): …Yeah, right. As if.

                      Many years later:

                      Hibiki: Am I not manly enough for you?

                      Verlene: Well… Whenever you sing in high-pitched voice, it can't be helped…

                      Hibiki: … Fine! Let's take this to the bed!

                      Verlene: ….!!!!

                      -----++-----++-----

                      Thank you!

                        ASlyDrake The story has some potential. I am concerned about the real life of MC. Cliche death and the second chance. I hope it will be not only transitioning from the event in game to another. It's my personal opinion so you don't need to follow it. I don't see any errors, you need someone with a higher level of comprehension to check this out. The story is at the beginning too, so it's little hard to say what's right and what's wrong. I will try to update the review after you release more chapters and I hope you won't drop the novel after this contest. Many novels are suffering from fate, being made only for conquest and dropped.

                            LividEdge I checked your story and it really needs good editing. (If I see the grammar chaos then it must be real!) Another concern is that you are writing it for the contest and I am afraid you will drop it right after it. Feel free to check my novel!

                                Asteralles I wanted to write a good review but I read these 3 chapters and I have no opinion about this novel. It's too early to make judgments about the story. I am not the best person to judge writing quality and style. I am sure, there will be some senior writer to help you! Good luck! You can check out my novel but I don't force anyone. Reading and writing is freedom!

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