Forsaken1 Your Novel: To all you early, birds, this was not meant to go public.

Haha, It looks funny!

      Clou_d left a review of your novel, it’s very good, just improve a bit on your grammar. Of course I understand if English isn’t your first language (I think I read that somewhere) so I hope you good luck for the future, keep on writing your great novel, Gaius!

        Forsaken1 hhmmm im writing without editing also and i do receive critics with grammar. hehe urs was just starting and with few chapters only. most readers i believe preferred to read with many chapters ahead since they dont like to wait much for new releases.

        just continue as long as u like what ur doing who knows it will lead to something in due time hehe.

          DragonKnight531 never give up, no one in the world gets their stuff right the first time. Even the authors of the most popular novels on Webnovel needed to practice and prepare a bit before they could become so famous.

          I (and I hope everyone here) use my self-deprecation as incouragment for me to improve myself( Although I don’t improve at all T-T) and I take some time to practice. It isn’t that your novel isn’t good, it’s just that you don’t have much practice yet since you’ve only posted 5 chapters, but with time, confidence(and/or no confidence), and the friends you have all around you, I believe you and everyone here can improved themselves by leaps and bounds.

              Finally! Webnovel is doing a survey on comments and whether or not they should add in a comment overview!
              Everyone, go to inkstone and take the survey so that we don’t have to suffer with flipping through every chapter to respond to fan’s comments. Let’s hope this gets added in quickly!

              luminouslyy i created it myself, i asked some mods and they said it should be fine since i posted it here in wn that's why it's a bit ugly and did not match the background.

                  "Quincy"
                  "Yes darling"
                  "I'm not yours yet"
                  "You were mine the moment I laid eyes on you😌"
                  "Quincy"
                  "Yes darling"
                  "You're too old"
                  "I heard older guys are spicier. The spicier, the better. I wouldn't say old, I'd say mature😈"
                  "Quincy, go home 🤦🏼‍♀️"
                  Quincy Davis shamelessly claimed Seraphina Jacob as his. He liked her at first sight, but he fell for her at the first "hello".

                  "Sera"
                  "Yes Quincy😊"
                  "My eyes are up here"
                  "Oh My. I prefer the two dangling eyes between your thighs. The nose in between is saying hello to me. Hi little Quincy. Let's get to know each other well in the future😈"
                  "Sera, eyes up here not down there🤦🏻‍♂️"
                  Seraphina Jacob shamelessly claimed Quincy Davis as hers. She liked him at first "naked" sight, but fell for him at the first "kiss".

                  This is a fluttering story about Quincy and Seraphina, and how their love blossomed in the Summer.
                  https://m.webnovel.com/book/12472705706547305

                    luminouslyy I have left you a review. Your story is so good! I hope for more updates :D

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